SolitaryMonarch
This is very good , is a Novel with a true unlimited potential , and that I want to say is , First : please don’t abandon the novel , if you write it good you can obtain a first class novel or even a top novel in this page. Second: if he Is the world I was thinking about he can be something similar to the Heavenly Dao of the novels, that ones who have conscience, like the one of “Journey of the fate destroying emperor” , this is just an idea Third: YOU CAN DO IT , PLEASE CONTINUE THIS , this remember me to some novels that have a lot of potential and it would be a waste to abandon it ( yes I’m traumatized with that because that is VERY common in web novel, please don’t do that i need to go with the therapist another time)
Is it shameful to give your own book 5 stars? What a joke! If I can't like my own book, who else will? Besides that... I'm seeing all the "Don't drop the book" comments, can you guys also see the pressure that writing a story like this has? ;3 I'd just like to say that I don't plan on doing so at all. I quite like how things are going and I'd like to make this one of the best light novels out there. But thanks for the support guys, I really appreciate it and the fact that I'm getting so much love despite this being my first book is really welcoming. So I thank you.
Above-average idea, below-average writing. Lots of potential, but the writer clearly needs a ton more practice before being able to pull of what he wants; as it is, the style is inconsistent, sentences are often repetitive, and the descriptions, details, world-building and so forth are done in an odd, jarring manner. The only reason the WQ gets 2 stars is because I've seen far worse on this site. Great idea, though.
So far this novel is pretty promising. I've read several world building novels like this and the hardest thing for most people is pacing themselves. More often than not they will try to speed things up to get to the "good parts", so I can't help but feel reshreshed to see the author taking their time here... I look forward to seeing how you grow your world.
I'll be honest, I like the concept and how the characters are carried, but I don't know if I would recommend it, the armor of the plot is too much at the beginning so do not expect any kind of explanation, literally everything happens just because. An argument that is often repeated a lot in this novel is: Something incredible that probably no one would have thought of. It is not that I complain, but if you stop using it in excess, it would help a lot of dear author. Anyway, if you want to read something new if I recommend this work but do not expect something from the other world.
What can I say? This novel is just another level, the grammar is good, and there are some mistakes but that's normal, and is more than possible to read it. We have at least one or two chapters every week, and that's fine with me. The story development is very interesting, bruh he is a WORLD, and the author doesn't hurry the story. Furthermore, the character design and the world background also are very nice, character design can improve, but they have something uncommon, they are ALIVE. And the background is still making but so far is very good.