1st_Manga_KING
The prologue is awesome, the story and world have great potential, and I would seriously like to see that potential fulfilled. It just has one glaring issue, the MC. He is like frustration incarnate. If frustration was a sin then he is the demon whoes job is to induce as much as possible. I've been able to deal with stupid MCs for a few dozen chapters before... But this guy, just after half a dozen chapters, I already wanted to crawl through my phone and beat him myself!
I will start by saying I only read what was free. I like the idea behind this story and the general world background. The MC gets everything through plot armor with no real sense of a struggle. The fight scenes don’t give me a sense of anticipation or struggle and fall flat. He gets all these titles handed to him and there is no character building yet. Also the characters background is so out there it makes it unrelatable to me as a reader. A thesaurus would also go a long way in improving the writing quality. Basic grammar mistakes are riddle in each chapter and at times tye wrong word is used outright. I understand this is probably not a native English speaker so get an editor you already are getting paid for chapters so the least you can do is have quality grammar
So far, the plot was superb but in some aspects, things seems odd. Jurisdiction in his previous world is so generous for someone who needs death penalty. His background story seems off with his private matters. And most of all, the writing gives too much nasty taste. I don't know, it's just the narrator gives facts then question it. I really don't know. But overall, the plot is good. If you want to enjoy this novel, forget about your common sense because it doesn't exist for this novel. Read every paragraph comments to enjoy the novel more.
I stopped reading after Chapter 90. Sadly, despite its enormous promise, this is one of the most irritating and aggravating stories I've ever read. The narrative of the story is its strongest and greatest point. On the other side, the execution could have been better. Mc's stupidity demonstrates this. Who continued making the same strange decisions? The Mc? He is, in fact, the one in question. Why is this so awful and aggravating? The author clearly places the protagonist in perilous positions and forces him to make rash decisions for the purpose of the story's growth. That makes sense; after all, it is the author's obligation to keep the plot going. The issue is that it came out as somewhat artificial and forced. It was irritating that the main character (MC) kept having these awful occurrences occur one after the other (It may be just the pacing). Still, I wish the writer the best of luck. The story may get better in the later chapters.
Really good novel. Like it starts of as a normal isekai (like ones with slime or ant). The world building is amazing and has a lot of potential. Recommendations for author : There could be more missions and build the world like The Legendary Mechanic with skills and evos. It would be great to see the characters develop like a relationship with the other wolf pup. There could also be kingdom building.
My recommendation is to wait for alot of chapters, then skim through them. It is enjoyable if you aren't serious when reading this, as it can be boring if you are. Not goving it 5 stars it doesn't deserve it. Story isn't worth much. Nothing is terrible, but nothing is good. It hasn't changed since the first time I read it. I am not being harsh because it's been at least a month since I first read the story. I picked it back up and I see no changes or improvement happening within any chapter.
Just finished reading a few chapters of this wolf-reborn novel, and I gotta say, it's got a unique vibe. 🐺🔥 The world-building is solid, and I'm totally hooked on the MC's journey. But the MC can be a bit frustrating at times, and some parts feel off. Still, it's a fun read if you're into wolves and fantasy. Just let go of your common sense and enjoy the ride. Keep up the good work, author! 🌟👍