Man_of_culture
So it's obvious the author is just messing around so I'll give it the pro's and con's. pro - It's a reincarnated into a snake.. that's about it. - the action is ok. con - the grammar is horrible. - obvious rip off of chrysalis but much worse. - The way you announce the change to first and third person is annoying. - Even though it is a fantasy there should be at least some common sense logic. - The system and leveling lacks detail. - The story jumps very quickly into action before we can really even get a feel of what's happening. - Again things happen just to happen.. I'm pretty tired of the same "English is not my native language" then don't write in English lol. This story is all over the place and I've only gone through the first 10 chapters. The author is just writing on the fly instead of actually Mapping out the story. 2.5/5
So far this little story has some attention of mine Most novels only focus on the MC but this one like Overlord, it has deepth and backgrounds for side characters and the world itself I would like to have some suggestions such as adding things that other novels don’t so that it will make your novel stands out and unique Keep it up I will give you 2 stone per day
I'm liking the novel so far. Hopefully there will be more chapters 😊. Also I hope the mc doesn't get a human form, it's so overdone. Hopefully he just stays a snake. Also I'm not really a fan when the monsters end up evolving into more than what their species are. Say a snake turning into a dragon or growing wings. If flight is an issue just use air magic lolol
Dear author, I wish you good luck because I quit my request on making a same novel as yours. That's why I decided to write a new novel called as "Constellation Awakening". I'm truly sorry for using your novel title without asking permissions, I don't even know that you also have the same idea as mine.
This is amazing! No seriously. I love reincarnation books, and this one is already a potential favorite for me. If you are like me and are looking for something a bit different from the typical harem reincarnation books, then this one come heavily recommended from me. The characters are are well fleshed out. The author sets a good pace for the story. The fight scenes and characters' thoughts are well detailed. The world building is pretty good as well. Fair warning, this is a fairly new book, so be prepared to wait a while for the chapters to be released. Other than that thank you very much Author for the amazing book so far. I'm really looking forward to the future of this book.