Reviews of Reincarnated As a Lunarian With Sign-İn System
Reincarnated As a Lunarian With Sign-İn System
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Just started reading and this Is my opinion on it as I just finished V1. I am not a professional story reviewer so take this review with a grain of salt if you don’t like it 👍. 1.) Mc is a shameless prideful moron who boast every time with barely any character development. 2.) The foreshadows are not that hard to understand but it’s too easy to see where the direction of the story will go. 3.) Needs a wisdom or intelligence stat as the Mc really needs it, as I feel like all those lies and boasting are useless if you just cluelessly say it to everyone and then it backfires later on. 4.) I don’t recall why he is even shameless and prideful in the beginning, we just see him as some sort of a ‘Npc’ with a set emotion, temper, and personality in the beginning of the story. Basically a weirdo. 5.) System and story is basically just a weird and interesting one with the Mc who seems like he just got transmigrated started being calculative and shameless off the bat and later on kills without any remorse and side effects in his mentality as the author doesn’t tell us if he ever killed anyone in the past before or if his bloodline changed him. 6.) I’ll POSSIBLY change this review if it gets better or worse in the later chaps as I don’t trust the reviews in this website as a lot of them are just baseless 5 star spams and I don’t have a really positive view of this story.
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Definitely an interesting story to keep an eye out for, and yea Abel is not perfect. He is calculating, uses lies to hia benefits along with canon knowledge and I as a reader am okay with that. Especially if it makes the story better. Could he have handled things better, yes. Could he have gotten quality crewmates and handled things better in east blue? Yes. But its the authors story and we are only along for the ride, 5 years before canon starts is a very long time and by the sounds of it Luffy is about 11 to 12. An already we can see ripples of his actions affecting the east blue. Keep up the good work. I personally would've added Alvida to the crew and had her as a quarter master. Worked her to the bone to lose the weight and train her beyond her limits. Making her 1000 times better than her canon counterpart. But again, that is what I would do, author has other ideas. I look forward to his choices and decisions. In a weird way he kinda reminds me of Tengen. Kinda. But anyway, I look forward to more of this story.
Review for first 20 chapters: One of the strangest one piece fics I have ever read. MC is very unpredictable as he generally does whatever he wants. İt is an interesting read though, some chapters are hilarious. Mc gets strong fast but time passes slowly in the story. So far mc got like 3-4 times stronger in 4 days yet it took around 20 chapters. So it is not like a typical action-adventure fic as it has slice of life in it as well, even though it is not in the tags. Also canon... it is gone by now and I have no idea where this story will go.
This won’t be a hugeky comprehensive review. However the character is a unique person who personifies shamelessness allowing funny comedic moments. World Building=5 Stars because of One Piece. Chapter update stability could be better but the quality iS great. Writing quality is phenomonal. So far the story is progressing well, just author take youe time to plan things etc.
Well, this will be my first time writing such a long review. When I first started reading it, I had 0 expectations and the first few chapters were kinda meh. But it pickes up rather quicky and a good read overall. Writing Quality: Great. There are few mistakes but they are mainly typo. Grammar is solid overall. Stability of Updates: Well, I binged it recently so, not sure. Story Development: Now... The story progress is good. But time is going slow in the story. 49 chapters in and only like 1 month passed. A lot of things happened in this 1 month and mc gets stronger at a fast rate since he trains and has a cheat. The timing is slow probably because there are a lot of characters to focus. Mc is also a character that doesn't care about canon and does whatever he wants so he is very interesting. Mc really deserves the title 'Chaotic Neutral'. He has no morals whatsoever yet he doesn't do anything evil for no reason(he does it sometimes tho, when benefical to him), he also doesn't seem to have bloodlust against civillians even though he lets them get killed in several occasions. Well... Idk how the author even came up with such a character. He really is very unique. As for side-characters there are a few interesting ones. Especially Bernard( my favorite). One annoying yet funny thing about mc is that he lies A LOOOT. Sometimes it is fun sometimes annoying. And he speaks so much nonsense too. He also talks trash to literally anyone, including his crew. One thing I want to see is his interractions with Sanji though! Mc just skipped over him lol. World Background: Well, it is one piece, so obviously great. Overall: A very interesting story with an unpredictable mc. I wonder how it will progress. [img=update][img=update]
Very weird mc... Story is also very weird, even the system itself is weird. However the story keeps getting better as I get to know MC's personality more. Anyways it is a decent read, 5 stars to author for writing something unique I have never read before. Be warned though, mc's personality is very weird he is like prideful,carefree,cautious, shameless at the same time. He is also a little crazy in my humble opinion.
