This is an amazing story. I can’t get enough of it! I love the combination of a little bit of mystery, fantasy, comedy, and some romance.
Being your 1st novel and all this is pretty good. Keep up the good work! The more your novel grows the more you'll get noticed. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I found this novel by chance im i am so glad i did it is one of the best i have ever read and i just wanted to say that i love this novel so much i cant wait to see where it lead. 😁
Good book enjoy the story just hoping for more from you.
From start to finish I enjoyed reading your novel... You kind of have a undecided love interest when it comes to Yumi and Alice that gives the reader some romance but not enough leaving me wanting to see where things go. I enjoy the idea of Angel's and Demon's so I really can't wait to read more. Good job author!
The story was good. i like it. I can say that this novel has great potential to grow. Keep on writing author-san. There are a few mistakes in writing and also missing punctuations but it is still readable. Keep it up!
This was one of the first books I read on this app, and it was interesting due to the world and themes that have been portrayed inside of it.
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Love the book and the author is finally getting back to it if you want more announcements check the discord server and if you want to follow a certain god we have roles for that lol.
This story if very entertaining for me. Love the twists and turns and overall character development. Can't wait to see what happens next. Some of the cliffhangers really make you worry about characters.
I really loved this book it was amazing the only sad part for me is that it's over, if anything I just wish that there were chapters. but I completely understand if the writer finished this book because it was amazing none the less. if you are thinking about reading this book o suggest that you do.
the story is absolutely amazing and the developement of the character is vert good same with the World back ground who is very rich, it's a shame that it was dropped.
I can't wait to read more of this!! I hope the author post more chapters soon! This is one of the greatest books I have read on here! Pls post more soon author!!!!
The world is vast and large, with several races, the angles, demons, and humans, some angels have fallen, and the main character is one of them, The story is great just halfway the story got a bit too cringey for me so I stopped.
There are occasional typographical errors but nothing that makes it illegible. The story is reminiscent of old-school RPG's (ie: Final Fantasy, Dragon Quest, etc). I enjoy where the story is going, and it feels nostalgic.
It was great please try to update more often.? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is the firs book i read on this website this is amazing despite the mitor language errors, The charactersd are interestiong , unique and have real progression
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Over all it is a great story my only problem is the grammar and spelling. Sometimes the grammar is bad and you can't understand the word other times the grammar is good enough to get the meaning of the word.