I feel it is a little like another one of the sites that I'm reading and I don't know which one came first so I'm a bit confused there. But other than that it has an interesting spin on separate mater like fallen angles.
It is really good and there is little that can be improved in my opinion i can read this all day. I think that the only improvement would be to have a freind proof read for errors in spelling and gramatical errors but it is a great story overall.
I love the story!! You should read it, I love the way the Mc could speak what's in her mind and honestly the way she save her loved ones I love it! Please read in this novel in you certainly love it!!!
I honestly love this story. It is addictive and enticing. I love the whole fantasy world, it is so cool to me. I love that there all different types of races and things. The stats are a cool thing. It feels like I could be playing an online game but Iβm not. Iβm reading a story.
I really enjoy the way that the author has brought everything to life, and built a solid world with a solid character who is not tremendously overpowered but has enough power to stand out from everyone else π
This novel is awesome! The story has a steady development, it doesnβt happen to fast but it doesnβt move to slow either. Although I think the story development is at a steady pace, I canβt say the same about character development. I just feel like Alice is a little too overpowered for her own good, this is just my opinion though.
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Really good book would love to eventually see this get turned into a comic and maybe eventually into a anime i have really high hopes it get turned into a comic thanks for writing it
I love the story line and can't wait to read more! There were some things needing corrected, but otherwise it's a great read! The main character is interesting to me so far.
ITS WONDERFUL, IM NOT SPOILING A BOOK THID WONDERFUL, though she is a fallen with 2 gods as her parents a wonderful shadow and stolen memories that her father put in her head.
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Love the plot the story and Characters. Every thing i feel like the growth for the Fmc is very stable and i actually feel like im on a journey in a wonderful and new world thank you so very much :).
I love this book. It has about everything I want in a book like this I love the characters and the how in each Chapter the mc gets more and more powerful
Greater than before.
This story has an amazing plot and an awesome mc. Tue background characters arent bad either and the world design is well done, everything is well balanced. In my top 5. Love it good work.π€ππ€ππ€ππ€ππ€ππ€ππ€πΊπΊπΊπΊπ
Its a good story I love it. I like the characters a lot. If I were to write something like this rating would be zero. Since I can't write as good I appreciate people who can.
The story is amazing and I love little shadow!! So. cute!!!!!!!! I think you should keep on going with it. Good luck!!!!
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The opening story is good, I wonder what will happen next. Well done! I like this story to be honest. β₯οΉβ€β₯οΉβ€β₯οΉβ€β₯οΉβ€β₯οΉβ€β₯οΉβ€β₯οΉβ€β₯οΉβ€β₯οΉβ€β₯οΉβ€β₯οΉβ€β₯οΉβ€β₯οΉβ€More..............................................................................................................................................
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