Yolohy
Genuinely the best novel I have read so far on this app and the only one I have spend coins on so far. The dialog is funny and clearly well thought out, the fight scenes never seem to get old, and best of all, you might feel like you have an idea of what will happen next but all that can change within 1 chapter and it doesn't feel forced. Even if you don't have the time to read to often, you should 100% read this. It has great pacing, interesting and well written characters, an amazing and unique concept. An all around amazing novel that I would recommend to anyone.
Seriously Yolohy knocked it outta the park again with this one. Well paced, well written, fun characters, great action, consistent rpg elements and stats, a great setting, and a fun Mc. Only thing I think I'd want to see is longer chapters, but I understand why they aren't. Every time I open the app I check for a new chapter here first, very fun read!
My brother was here around the 15th chapter a a month and some weeks ago. Not disappointing. World building is O.K. , author doesn't over-season with adverbs. Now, the book is probably the gold I've been digging to find on webnovel. Recommended 10/10, can't guarantee that the book will stay that way, though.
Alright, just from the title, I am very interested. Reading this I feel like I am part of the story. I got to feel many emotions. The story is very amazing! You've done a great job but I am not satisfied. I love to read more about the story progress. Learn about what happened. Let this story be free I don't have a lot of pass and power stone. I will support you by reading. I'll vote if I have a lot power stones.
Writing quality is excellent haven't seen any mistakes so far. The stability of the updates is relatively good it isn't perfect but it is good enough. Story develops in a unique way and relatively straight forward way. Character design is pretty simple and has predictable characters but the story shows that the character design has more potential as of the latest chapter 35 as one of the characters has showed growth. World background isn't really explained partly because of how many chapters as the story is just starting to pick up but right now but it looks like it will be a classic apocalyptical dog eat dog world type but this is just a guess. 4/5 Overall Review: Has potential and has a unique concept and idea with so far flawless grammar with a decent stability for updates and good story development and understandable and reasonable character design with a simple world background and I am looking forward to reading the full story.
Writing quality [★★★★★] Story development [★★★★★] Character design [★★★★★] Updating Stability [★★★★★] World background [★★★★★] > everything in this story pretty well written and interesting.I'm currently waiting for the update until this story end. So author-san keep a good work and take care yourself!. > I think you give to female lead an human form when the times come if you don't mind 😉
Very good this book !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This story is AMAZING! I would rather it higher however I saw the last update was 1yr ago?! I mean I've already caught up to the Liam and Luna story but this one was equally as good and you stopped at what seemed to be the middle of the story. I hope you get back to this, both this story and the other one deserve to be on bookshelves for sure.