Darkswan
Okay sis, the book started off great, quite interesting I want to see what becomes of Julia and how she deals with her problems but there are a few grammatical errors that needs to be fixed. the story is nice and so are the characters, I would like to see how the FL powers grow and if she will get her life back.
Hey there, if you're reading this, then you should read this book. You'll love the main character and don't get me started with the plot! It's so good. There are some writing mistakes, but they are vague, so don't worry about them. Because you'd love the plot. Believe me. This is what I called ~a masterpiece~
I like it, but there could be more. The story building is fine, yet I can't really read it too well with all of the grammatical errors. If the errors are reduced or fixed in the later chapters I do not know, someone please leave a response to this review if they have and i will then happily read it.