Since many Authors do it. I'm gonna do the same. A question and answer review. (*ignore the 5 stars). So if anyone has any questions related to anything, don't be shy, ask away. I'll be more than glad to answer your queries. Have a happy day ❤️ May happiness finds your way. 😊
I'll be real, the story premise is really good. The only problems are constant change of POV, OOP flashbacks and redundant POV. If I describe this novel, it's like holding a bunch of strings with varying lengths with POV attached to the end and dragged onwards to create a story...
So apparently if uou stick to it it's a vood story... and the premise is nice, but oof the writing style is wanting. It's not bad English or anything like that. It just feels like the author slapped some words on a piece of paper and moved on. No flavour. Calling it a writing "style" is a stretch. But if you don't care about that, go ahead and read. The story is better than other stuff I've read (so far).
I dropped because there is like 30 characters POV on those nobody care about 25. And POV swap 2 to 5 times per chapter. + sometimes its for the same event ? sometimes 2 peoples talk to each other than we switch POV to have the same dialogue over again with the other one POV. It can be good from time to time but you find this at least once every 4 5 chapter.
well i found this in my daily recommendations and thought about giving it a go for 20 min and here i am after using all my fast passes for the day .....pretty good read actually....[img=recommend] #OP MC # hiding true abilities# reincarnation(?) #Gods #kingdoms #Demons #Pragmatic MC #Proactive MC #Multiple transported individuals(?) #systems(?) #Caring MC............
this story is a Total gold.. character design is great and everything is just amazing for me... keep it up author 👍 u have created an awesome story.
The novel is beautiful. I like the characters and their growth. The world is also well structured and as the story progresses it becomes more and more interesting.
Exceptionally great so far. Syntactically a few things might be changed but in general, the story streams exceptionally pleasantly. Some of the time it may be a bit surged but keep going, Really good so far. Well done author!
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Very good so far. Grammatically some things could be changed but overall the story flows very nicely. Sometimes it is a bit rushed but I believe transferring worlds is really hard to do in a fluid way. Overall a great novel and much better than a lot of the higher ranking titles.
In this story you get the overpowered character quality while also having interesting characters and reactions to the main character! The story is also coherent so far! It's really good. My only gripe is the constant pov changes which I strongly dislike. It makes it confusing as to who I refers to if you happen to forget the one line at the beginning refers to.
the story is gold just need more chap daily and the storys should keep going at this pace,author just dont disappoints us. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Really good so far. Well done author! Keep writing and keep posting. Don't give up. Will be waiting for you to post more chapters! Keep up the good work!
The strong character and an unique story, are very good. Highly recommended for all of you who like reincarnated story. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Although this story might start slowly, the author wants to create a solid basis on which the plot will begin developing. Nevertheless, it's easy to follow, the main character is interesting, and the setting is full of diverse magical elements, races, and characters. Recommended.
First off, I really like the character of the MC. That's my ideal MC. Second, the writing style is a bit unique, as it's placed in well written dialogues that are understandable, and because of the set up of the paragraphs that makes it fairly easy to read. Even the extra unnecessary details are well done. I don't really see any faults within. The novel tells a good story too, although a bit cliche of course, but it's good! 8/10 would recommend!!
I read through the first three chapters and wow. I love the motive for the main character, as well as his progression so far. I have never read or even heard of a Reincarnation story that has the protagonist actively trying to go back to his old life. Makes for a very fun and entertaining read.
You did a very great work author. Full of new ideas and I must say the MC is really strong. Keep going because I'm my opinion it's going to be a very great novel in future 😊
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Everything just kept me looking forward to what is next. Starting from the title itself. All I can say is the storyline Is great and believe this is going to be a great one in time to come. Keeping going author 👌👌👌 I'm waiting for more updates from you