Ullyr
First and foremost—Writing Quality, among the best that I have read so far in Webnovel. The paragraphs are well done, anyone can read this without overheating their brain cells. Early chapters are written well enough that you won't even need to read to tens of chapter to discern the quality yourself. No inconsistency like what most had grown numb to be considerate with. The transition of each arc is smooth, reading it was like listening to a sophisticated storyteller. Author give proper formulas on how to derive the numbers he's inputted. The characters does not think with their second head and are mature enough expected given their own life experience, plus had their own individualities that differentiate each from one another. The settings works within its logic & detailed enough to be vivid in one's imagination.
Really Enjoying this novel! The updates are solid, the story is epic, writing is very Enamoring, definitly top 2 system novels comparable to Blood warlock. so glad i picked up this book. harem is well thoughtout and not overbearing at all in regards to the story. Interested in seeing more Harem scenes, characters are also well developed. best kingdom building ideas very creative and well thoughtout.
A very promising novel. A unique take on the system / game genre by forcefully bringing everyone into a unique world filled with danger, items, and experience points! I look forward to how this story will go. Writing and grammar are great, and I can feel that the author had a plan when he started this novel. I pray for more updates in the future!
Was great i read until around chapter 98 (Glass) BUT one thing that turned me off was the harem I'm not a fan of romance in the novels i read but i was kinda glad this one had a wife it was fine until he introduced other females into his relationship with his wife was a big let down because he did'nt have to story was already great but good story if u like harems not for me tho have a good day author!>.
I was a fan of the author's first novel, and hope that one day he decides to tackle that world again. After talking to him, he'd said that he'd made to complicated of a Universe for his first try. Anyway, I started reading this one as soon as I saw him writing again. So far this novel is to the point and easy to read. Author is very good about quickly correcting a mistake if you happen to notice one. The release rate this time has been awesome, 12 chapters in just 3 days already. Based on what he's told me, the world background and what's going on will reveal itself as the story goes and the MC starts to research. There haven't been many characters so far, but it is easy to imagine how they are interacting the way they are written. Overall a fun and simple novel, great System setup that isn't too complicated, and I can't wait to read more!
Currently on chapter 163. I love this story a lot. What makes me excited about the story is to know what Talent/Skill mc get, and whats gonna happen after he upgrade the skill. I also like the simple kingdom building aspect of the story. there is a chapter that shocked me the most, its the one with '18+' scene. idk what to say anymore, my english s bad 😂 i hope author won't drop this story 👍👍
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
This is fascinating story for a couple of reasons. Firstly, introducing an MC who has a family to care for at the very beginning adds a lot of depth to the character and adds complexity to the novel. Also, the power system introduced is unique and interesting, while it is familiar enough to be easy to understand it has realistic differences that many novels do not address. Finally, the MC himself is quite the entertaining character.
One of the few stories worth of a 5 Star review in my opinion, excellent and engaging plot, likeable and interesting characters and a new exciting world that is growing with time. It is one of those books that even if it has some mistakes the qualities far outshine the rest, you want to keep reading more and more, you care about the characters and get invested in where things are going next. It has Magitech, which is fairly rare to find good books with, its system is actually something is explained about without being at the end of the book and has not too long drawn out fights. The pacing is fairly good for reading, I managed to binge it all in a single day without having my brain melt due to how well written it is, the lemons are not forced and seem pretty natural all things considered. But by far my favorite thing in this book is the drive of all races to improve themselves and not just fall over once the plot requires them to die, it makes the world so diverse and full of possibilities, so many balances and variables to pay attention that it keeps you excited what will go down in the future, they are not just tropes but working and functioning civilizations (at least so far)
First time ive written a review. The World Building is incredible. One of the best parts about this book is the Author taking the time to answer the questions we have. To write this kind of story, you need to be good with keeping track of all the small details about skills and character sheets. The Author clearly has everything organized.