Reviews of Record of Genesis: Anime Battefields
Record of Genesis: Anime Battefields
Zaelum
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Hellow~ Everyone!!!! I hope you guys enjoy it!~ So.... I will give myself a 5 STARS!!. Because I like it!, not only because I wrote it~... Also because I like writing, even if English is not my native language I will always do my best. In life and in bed... alone.
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I love how this story takes a different turn a has earth become the first world created as Eden with humanities imagination seeing parts of the other worlds and turning them into our favorite stories and anime I give the author top markes for creativity and imagination and beg for more chapters in the future
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I will be honest, it is boring, too much explanation about terms that most of us already know since they are very common in the games, and the part where you put on the difference of attack and defense when you beat a monster seems to me to be unnecessary, the innate ability of the mc is a lucky hit, but its luck statistic is only one point, which is illogical, we all know that the status points directly affect the usefulness of an ability, for example the magic skills depend directly on intelligence and wisdom, instead the Physical skills depend on strength and agility, now, what sense does the MC have an ability based on luck, if you have a lower than average luck, not to mention that luck is a statistic that cannot be raised normally and It can only be raised on rare occasions or with the help of objects, it seems that you wanted to create an op ability, but you did not take into account the factors necessary for the ability to work cione, only works forged form. pd: I liked your previous job more
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Hoping this one goes on for a bit and advances well. Bluntly speaking I’m hoping for more character development, which, do to previous works, leads me to believe you are fairly decent at, however I myself am quite fond of the numbers and technicalities put into this novel so far, so I am a fan, however, if your really want to do perfect, I’d recommend checking out the likes of Einlion’s work and Glyax’s among a variety of others who do well. Primarily for inspiration and some tips/guidelines to help progress your own style, and because their stories are enjoyable to me, and I’d recommend them. Not sure how helpful this is, but let’s get you your rating and do keep up the good work. I’m rooting for you, so good luck with your story, and try to take this one all the way to a suitable ending, which is all readers ever want from authors.