godfreyngsze
I hope you pick this novel back up its a rare gem. Your character development is very well done, you progress strength at a pace that is neither to fast or to slow giving all of the character time to acclimate to growth while developing interesting personalities. You made the marvel universe your own while respecting its origins this is something that is sadly hard to find in fanfictions as most people just want to write their fantasies with no real thought to the story or characters. I will be sad if this is as far as you take this story cause I have grown attached to you characters but even if it goes no further thank you for the great story.
Good story, good plot, comedy... etc. the reference from original marvel movies is make you want to see the movie again to make sure... “it’s really happened?” Of cause! Most of it! (Some got change by MC or should I say by author. LOL) make you know more about marvel hero(s) and villain(s). Make me wander what will happen next? Will he help Avenger fight Loki? Will he help Rogue (X-men) from Erik magneto’s plan? Will he help Captain America fight against hydra in Captain America: The Winter Soldier? (If he is ... I think he’ll steal some their technology too) Will he help Jean grey (X-men) from her power going berserk? And last but not last... Can he take some samples from INFINTY STONES? All marvel fans, I highly recommend all of you to read this novel. Author, please keep up your good work! 👍
Tbh the only thing I dont like with this story is that the author has been Mia for a while now. Fanfic has decent pacing and good character development. Mc is not super op but continues to get stronger as time goes on. Although the dates of some event are mixed up or just plain wrong it doesn't really matter since it's a fanfic and it's done pretty well so can't really complain about the small stuff. Romance is decent and unlike most fanfic mc isn't thinking with this third leg when he does stuff. Good luck author hope you come back soon.
Good concept, decent world, dry writing style, poor grammar. Virtually every sentence has at least one grammar mistake, often more. This is most often things like not capitalizing "i" or forgetting to use "it" or "the" in a sentence, or even mixing up words, "pelt" instead of "pellet." Overall a good story that could really have shined if it had been put through a spelling check software, or even just some casual editing instead of posting the chapter the moment the first draft is written.