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Over all I love this it's amazing. I probably couldn't do any better, author-sans English is a bit wobbly some times, but if there is any you have to look hard to notice it. The update is kind of slow but author-San is in school so it's a good reason why it's so slow. Besides my nitpicking it's amazing and I hope this will go over 100 or more characters. π
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Shamless 5 star Review.. bla bla blubb. You all now how authors say it. Itβs first attempt at a real story. So itβs obvious that I wonβt be perfect. I wonβt deny that. But if itβs really a **** 1 Star Story youβll have to read it first and tell my why it is. :P I actually liked writing it. So please tell my if you liked reading it so far and feel free to give me advice, correct my mistakes and give me your input on what might happen next. :)
Great story, novel idea, masterful execution. The only real issue is the fact that the updates are so slow. the language issues are ignorable, and the writing quality(how the writing flows) is barely affected.(Iβm pretty sure he also goes back and fixes up the chapters when he can, cause the date the chapters were updated changes) All in all, please improve update speed. Thatβs all I really want, love your story, look forward to more.
This is the best "life as a pokemon" books I have ever read in my life! Its honestly amazing and the way the character evolves/develops? Is a diffrent and unique way to take a story. I am honestly so impressed. Most books like this go with eevee main characters. Not that I mind, because I love eevee! It's just nice to get some new ideas, y'know? Anyway like I said book is totally amazing and can't wait for the future updates. π
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Well the story was good Until he started revealing he wss from another world for no other purposes than I talked with them for a day It gives no benefit and a lot of harm like Pokemones cant be trusted with secrets and tells it to A female cat of all things what if the pokemon gods notice him and smite him the mcs also a fool who feels bad for what he kills and they portray pokimons as being able to be revived