PancakesWitch
Keep uo the good work Author !!. πβ€βπ I am honestly just really in love with female lead system novels that are NOT YURI! I am somehow uncomfortable with this genre , so i would be ecstatic if the author confirmed it even if i can see that it's not mentioned , well anyhow i hope the FL get with a nice guy that is slightly jealous and protective .
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It's an enjoyable novel if you don't mind the "clichΓ©" structure/direction "reincarnated human as a monster" novels have. Idk if it's what the author wanted but when Maria starts to think about everything and loses the focus of the main problem/thing she was thinking about (sorry for the reiterationπ) the writing starts to feel dense or reiterative. I also liked the way the chapters are started. Overlapping a little bit with the end of the last one is a nice way to keep on track if the lector reads them at different times(?) (different days, hours, etc. I don't know if I said the correct expression). Although I like the feature, sometimes they are a copy of the last chapter, making it difficult to enjoy reading the same thing again, or they start before the ending of the last chapter, making it confusing to follow when little details change. I've only read the start of this adventure and I'm sure the author is improving (and will continue to improve) the quality of their writing.
Not bad novel and it's recommend to read it if you want breath about reading Chinese Novels. Author-San if you really want to make it MYTH story you should search about myth and not copy other that don't read myth and just copy them and please don't make the story really a myth into early of novel it will make the story unbalance or quite cliche story. 4 star into story development 4 star into world background And the rest is 5 star