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Its a confused mess! The story doesnt flow properly and needs to be revised. I was really looking forward to the story but somethingβs Need to be cleaned up. How she got her skills through the capsule? Is she was a psychic since birth couldnt she have seen her outcome by following the man? She was a novel at 6 and transmigrated over 20? How did she die before?
letter to the author of this novel: Dear Author, Even thou at the beginning the novel seems to look like the business woman at school, but nevertheless I invested my time in reading through it to chapter 80+ because there was a difference only for me to see that you had stop updating the story for the past 24 days, WHY??
The development of the story is pretty good. I had waited for a couple of days to read this book, and I'm satisfied with the result of my waiting. The only thing I can hold the author accountable, is the almost no use of commas. But it's nothing bad. Keep going my dear author, I like your story. (One of the few that makes me buy chapters after buying coins...) lol
I just want to thank this Author for my blurry eyes, and under eye bags. Iβve read this non-stop. I really love the way itβs written. It doesnβt drag and have a lot of filler words just to add space. The characters are well written. Itβs has a great storyline and I love it so far. Such a great find!!