Kotrem
The author here, I'm not going to say my book is amazing. For sure at the beginning, it was quite rough. Lots of plot holes, I've been going through the starting chapters and rewriting a lot of them. I've fixed chapters 1-23. 24+ is pretty smooth, there shouldn't be any plot holes. In my perspective, my book started bad and has started to become better. My release schedule is going to be 2 chapters a day. I hope everyone enjoys my first long-term novel. (Meaning I didn't quit after ten chapters)
A story of an op torture loving psychopath who would make a good cult leader....with magic (Read to cp 39) The story is pretty good, but sometimes you see the author “clash” with the mc, making the mc do things that he would probably not do (then again a lot better then most with this), but usually he does not get out of “character” But I would say the worst part of it is the mc’s power is his “power ups” lack of “reason”.... I think he should have had a cost or at least “cult-like” sacrifices to gain or use the power, but that is just my opinion
This book is getting better and better. The more I read the better it gets. The plot is a lot more complex then it was before. The characters are starting to develop more. I would have to agree volume one the characters were 2d for sure. Now, however, the characters are starting to become alive. For sure it's not perfect, but it's way better than it was before. I would highly recommend this book to anyone that enjoys psychological novels. Best one I've read on this website!
This is a great book I have come across with a great plot. The story building is slow and gradual. There are times when one can get confused on what's going on but as you continue reading you get the real meaning or authors thought. This is a violent story which involves too much blood and killings. But is a great thriller and keeps the reader occupied. This is so far the best book I have read/reading.
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