AmrutaShinde95
So I started reading this book for light reading and I like the genre. But it has too many grammatical and sentence errors. It feels like too much stuff is going on and the story build up is not properly executed. The basic story is nice but I think the author can work on her writing and execution. I hope the author doesn’t get discouraged by my comment. I hope you keep on improving and keep on writing.
I try to read but i got bored after chapter 10. ML is stupid and coward. FL seems determined to find happiness and let go of everything which is good. But side character is quite stupid especially that villainess (the daughter of her brother’s aunt) she is utterly stupid. Her reasoning and excuses after ML found out her involvement tho was stupid. Overall i dislike the ML.
Honestly the Novel is worth a try, not a typical reincarnation who wants revenge after being reincarnated.. Just that it would be better if author-san check the grammar error find help with translators or proofreaders to help you with the writing quality .. this book has a chance to be at a top. am now excited with the development of the story. If you guys inclined with this genre then try this one.