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This story is great. I absolutely love and adore the writing style, characters and how the author makes the book feel so... good, I guess. I would rate it a 5Star if the stability had been better, and a little more introduced into the story. But that’s that and this is this. This story is losing a lot of potential viewers and fans because of the fact that many reviews are not as positive as mine. Just give it a chance, please.
An interesting and promising start. The video game described seems a bit unlike most, with Swordsmen cultivating Ki. Excited to see more, so please keep them chapters coming!
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At first I thought it was good but the development started becoming boring. The quality is well I wont be harsh just read more english books. The updates arent stable. The character's characteristics contradicts itself. A few twitching and it will be a decent story.
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Since i love the genre i have to give it 5 stars, plus it is being well written for my taste. I like how he reacts tp what happened, well also hope he goes around and beats old rivals while he is ahead and just gets more ahead hehehe would be fun
I've only read chapter one, because I'm tired of game novels, but I have to say, the grammar on this is excellent, I'm 1uite surprised this is even on WN. The battle on the first chapter is well described and exciting to read. Good luck with the rest of the novel, Shesmu 😀
Just author shamelessly giving myself five stars. But hey, the grammar is good, the battles are satisfying, the characters aren't dumb. What do you more from a novel in WN?
Really love the characters heartwarming bros excellent writing and character development in my mind really love this thanks a ton author a must read if you enjoy game reincarnation novels
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Honestly, can't find anything wrong with this. Writing is great. Stability is very consistent. Characters are realistic. The background is not a lot, but not too little. Problem is the power scaling of the MC. If the MC isn't streamrolling a majority of his opponents, then this isn't a logical or fun story, just a forced plot. 1. Top tier player, went back in time. Already fat advantage. 2. Noble birth, another advantage. 3. Knowledge of fighting techniques, another advantage. 4. Knowledge of hidden quests and places and whatnot, another fat advantage. You could have any one of these advantages and you'd be a strong player. Now, with all of them combined, the MC should be absolutely bodying, every single one of his opponents. From what I've read so far from the comments and replies by the author, the story seems to be heading towards a "strong to stronger" type. Not just straight-up overpowered. "Sure but where's the story then?" What about romance? Meeting up with friends again? Flexing on noobs? I admit I like Gary Stu plot. Sure, it's lame, but it's fun for me and that's exactly why I tried out this novel. "Wrong place then for such a story," you say? Lmfao, look at the 4 reasons above why I thought it was a Gary Stu in the first place. But good story overall. Also, too slow-paced for my liking.
Interesting and so far enjoyable story whose premise is very similar to RSSG. However although it is somewhat early to tell, i much prefer the style and content of this tale to that stilted, repetitive story. This author shows the mechanical effects of the game system, instead of explaining it blandly. Good start! Hopefully will become a favourite.
Really great book. I nice spin on RSSG from a new author. Has lots of details that enhance the reading experience. Uses science to further improve the virtual reality possibilities. Keep it up!
Very interesting, I'm surprised with author's creativity. Anyone should give it a go before judging it. I promised you won't regret trying it.
This is good. I can only hope that this will not be dropped. I enjoyed these 6 chapters and I'm waiting for more. 3 chapters/ week, I can deal with this.
I like it. It has a great story line. The possible outcome of the story taunts the imagination. I don not know the writers direction with the story but the glimpse thus far is addictive.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really like this story. Sometimes, it changes from past tense to present tense randomly, but I'm okay with that. The switch from normal narration to the mc's thoughts is also not shown through any mean, but I'm guessing its because of the bad formatting of WN, from what I read from the author's note. I think the characters have more depth into them than all the characters of every novel in this site combined, so it's really a breath of fresh air.