Nneeil
This novel .... the grammer and writing style... just *Muah* and 7 out of 5. Additionally, the story development and physiological insight on Protagonist's thinking have surpassed most of the Web novels here if not all. Even though the concept is somewhat clitche but it's totally understandable considering the colossal amount of effort it takes to think and weave a new idea in a story. However it always comes down to how the writer presents and ...oh boy... it definitely is one of the best. Especially so for the story development which is not forced to follow the clitche and give a very unique taste especially so considering that we have come here and have seen the 'tags'. THE TAGS, Very self explanatory indeed. Overall, a diamond in coal mine. A Koh-a-noor at that. Definitely recommend giving it a go but be sure to read to 'tags' beforehand considering some people tend to be less 'open' to these 'themes'.
While the story setting seems unique and interesting, with hidden organisations and what not, that's about the only thing of interest. The characters are all, without exception, broken and so superficial that it gets annoying when they just interact. I still don't understand how the harem tag comes into play here, since the mc is probably one of the most unlikeable characters if seen so far. He couldn't even care for his mom, who somehow managed to pay the bills for them to not end up on the street. the annoying part about that is that this not caring about anyone and not having emotions for anyone is emphasised repeatedly for no reason at all. Interesting world building with (imo) terrible character design. Good luck
After looking back at the novel I feel thrilled about this experience. The writing is top-notch, at least to my taste and I loved how the scenes were depicted, although I was shocked by some of them. I am looking forward to its further development. The main character does what he considers right and the "system" doesn't affect his own thinking or ensnaring him like a snake (at least for now). I couldn't take my eyes off it. Of course, I didn't expect a family-friendly story, but this was incredible. I found one or two words that were mistaken for something else, but all in all, it's awesome and also rich in vocabulary. Keep up with the story and absolutely don't drop this gem, author.
Hands down the best story I’ve read in this site, eagerly waiting for your update soon author! a checklist for you new readers If you like an MC with calm mind that know what he wants and how he gets it then it’s for you If you like an interesting magic lore then it’s for you If you like yandere girls that are actually good and makes sense then it’s absolutely your cup of tea!
The only reason I'm writing this review is because the author stated that this novel is gonna be the most memorable novel I'll ever read, which I would partially agree if I was able to read pass chapter 14. But there is one memorable thing about this novel, and it's the amount of bots, so far I counted 8. My Review: Writing Quality (5/10), Story Development (5/10), Character Design (2/10), World Background (3/10), Cringe (8/10), Edgy (8/10) Likable Mc: X Likable side Characters: None Grammer Level: Middle School ( No hard feelings dude, I'm not hating )