John_Doever
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Really well done, non cliche, even if there is some generic stuffs, the author takes a unique route on that. Writing is well done, good grammar, simple words but composed nicely, it gives u a visual representation of the descriptions. Overall, really well executed, hope you continue with this, keep up the work author ๐๐๐๐๐๐
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As of chapter 17.. Very well written story... It's just flows from each sentences to the other.. Not to mention how immersive this story is.. Both the MC and old thane is very well fleshed out you can really feel their individuality.. This one goes straight to one of my top lists and will stay there until the quality dropped.. period.
Yo, this story is actually hype. I see so much potential keep it up!๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Had to take a little time for a small review here. Like someone else said, I thought of some second rate story like others with similar descriptions before starting, but I was pleasantly surprised. The story is well thought through and the characters developed nicely. I liked especially chapter 10 and the conversations between Thane and Li. Itโs actually preferably than introducing a ton of characters in just a few chapter. One of the few stories on WN actually deserving 5 stars. I hope to read more of it, keep it up. :)
Don't often write reviews but this novel has some serious potential. It reads very well and isn't littered with writing errors that make many other novels on this website unreadable. But most of all, the worldbuilding has been slow and steady with a pretty good buildup. Where it all leads is definitely something to look out for.
Nothing unsatisfying in my book, one of the more developed stories that I have read. Unfortunately I already caught up but fortunately I was able to discover this hidden gem. Great pacing so far and ******* is built up nicely before the climax for each scene. An enjoyable read, give it a try everyone.