Suryaboddu
I love it overall, A few word errors, grammar, etc. But english is a difficult language and it is very easy to make mistakes. I can still read the story without putting in too much effort on my part. Great character and character development, I do not see things moving too fast or too slow, which is a common problem for me when reading off of sites like this. Each chapter brings something to the party. Many writers put in filler chapters so they can keep up with the constant upkeep. On those types of novels I can skip 10 chapters and still be able to know what us going on because the character have done nothing in that time. In this novel I feel every word is there for some reason or another. Keep up the good work, hopefully you dont go premium, although I know it is necessary in many cases. Dont be blinded by greed, and most of all enjoy what you are writing. Dont turn a passion into a job, else the love will disappear. Thanks 😁
I love the story... and I love more there's a no harem tag, I haven't read a lot of chapters because they're longer than I expected but I like the mc and almost every character, I like that he's not the kind of mc that do everything any girl tells him to do just because they're girls, I love that he's a good friend but he sees everyone in the same way... and if there's any romance I hope is with just one girl and he's not confused with any other.
I love the book and its one of those books on here that you always cheek to see if a new chapter came out. One of the things i love most is that all the events that happen are things that i would never have been able to imagine but decently realistic to what Would happen if it was actually happening. Overall I think this is an amazing book and I hope the author keeps writing more.
I absolute love this novel! It doesn't state the world as some good place or hell but shows the human nature at its most basic... In some chap he asks really good questions that most people think but never would say out loud, for the way the author write this novel and the MC I am an absolute fan! I don't care if the Gramma or some sentences are wrong cause I can look past those and see what a great novel this is! <3