CeritusOrbis
So paid from chapter 14 on and needs to passes to unlock. This I just wanted to mention first. The characters known until then are cardboard stereo types that aren't fleshed out yet. The world sounds interesting and numbers don't make sense. How does a meal cost 500 and 2 good starfighter weapons 100.000? Just 200 meals? How do you need 15k hours (100 seconds make 1 minute and 100 minutes an hour, so even longer than it sounds) for a military flight license? You either don't give it to normal people at all or under reasonable circumstances. So yes, good story, bland characters, interesting world so far but nothing amazing and completely bonkers numbers. Without the numbers writing quality and world background would have been better.
this is by far one of the better stories I have read on this app, and I have no earthly idea why this isn't more popular! it has a fantastic hook and continues to exceed my expectations at every turn. the chapters are long, so quite worth the money, and well, it is generally interesting. much recommended read.
La historia es impresionante pero desde que inicia el capítulo 14 se salta un montón de palabras y pierde coherencia o no están bien escritas las palabras porque hay espacios entre letras, además de que estoy pagando mis monedas para poder continuar la lectura no se vale. Por favor autor ordena la historia para que los lectores puedan disfrutarlo/la y no abandonarlo/la por esto.
On a military planet with mechas and warships that train recruits, when attacked from within and the fight goes on for a couple of hours but there are no reinforcements is impossible. A couple of warships from space will bomb them to death. This whole Synthetic terror chapter made put down the novel.