Slightly Attractive
I originally liked this story. It had a bit of fantasy a hint to an upcoming romance a strong FL and a system that wasn't annoying. I voted for it and looked forward to it a lot. When it finally came out I started reading and in came the disappointment. The FL went from strong and intelligent to flat, bossy, kinda mean and gradually approaching stupid. I started liking her system more than her. A system she increasingly ignores despite it offering good sound advice and being genuinely helpful. The ML has 0 personality just cold and only has a soft spot for the FL even thought THEY NEVER MET BEFORE?!???? He was saved by her mother and married the FL to pay that debt so not even a real connection between them. Also this story has a lot of characters they just cram into it and expect you to remember all their names AND nicknames. Before we reach even chapter 100 the girls children multiply from the 2 to 5 (adopted) WTH. And the story makes it seem like having that many children under the age of 4 isn't a bid deal because each child (despite 2 being newborns) is "sensible and obedient" the children only talk when the plot wants them to never get in the characters way or act like children it's ridiculous and there's no way I can remember all their names when they're basically all the same with no personality and despite being their "mother" she spends little actual time with them and the four year olds are "sensible" enough to take care of their younger siblings (THE TWINS ARE 4). In fact most of the characters fall flat with the exception of the system which the FL mistreats for no reason. The face slapping isn't even worth it at this point it just keeps getting worse. I'm trying to hold out and hope it will change because I really liked the first 40 chapters but at this point the chapters are way to short and way too bad to justify spending point on them. My recommendation skip this story
So basically a super agent with a convenient sub space (that’s never explained) gets magically whisked into the body of a young beautiful mother of two boys (adopted). The OG mom was good but had awful luck and was a pushover. In comes main character with FL syndrome and changes her life for the better. Pretty basic as far as plot goes. The exposition can get a bit heavy handed. The four year old twin sons are wayyy to mature for their age (genius kids are still kids people). And half the side characters lack even the smallest amount of common sense presumably so the plot can face slap. The story lacks any tension because a female lead used all her stat points on luck.I do like the FL though. so far she definitely has a 21st century mind but acknowledges that she’s in the past and needs to act a certain way as a woman from that time period even if it’s an act. Unlike other fl characters who won’t conform and make problems. It’s a fine read if you just need something to read. It’s kinda like a soap opera it’s not that good, overdramatized, and an enjoyable time waster.