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author here not with good news

I know my updating times are rather awful and not consistant i was unable to get 8 of the twelve chapters out on time due to events that happened and a wifi outage where i was on vacation which prevented me from getting chapters out.

with this i realize that i am not a good author because i cant get chapters out on time like i say this

also ties into writers block specificly on the point that is very hard as i now know to write a story with the mc as a tank or vehicle because the restrictions that apply and the base power of tanks

they have very strong guns that are meant to take out oposing armor

and when used against living things they kind of well turn into a cloud of bloody mist i have tried doing things to fix this issue so this is where it becomes hard to balance and write the mc

since the mc is well a tank that means anything i throw at the mc in the story currently is well useless and cant do anything

this is resolved in phase two but there are other things like the fact i did have a plan for the story's entire plot but filling it out posed problems like interactions are akward and feel forced and i couldnt write them in a natural way thus why i put the faction perk to help with that but that was a temporary solution and i just could not find a way to fix this.

another issue is growth of power

and my massive screw up with how i started and another issue

but of how i screwed up it was how i introduced the power the mc has with him getting a ww2 tank which has a gun that can kill modern tanks like abrams t72 and well almost every tank out there so if i have a enemy that can ressist this kind of damage it either works or fails very badly

HE shells do damage regardless because shell will go boom as soon as it touchs somthing but to balance that out well its not possible since i went with mostly reality but with some game elements so i cant balance out damage because it would be a paradox the book i built has a flawed foundation so i am sorry that you all waited and used your power stones on this book

the chapters will also be removed in a while