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I'll quick talk about aspects of the book: Strength: - Highly readable grammar - Vivid imagery - Reasonable chapter length - Seemingly well sorted out plot - Dialogues (you can potentially hear the characters speaking in your head) Weakness: - As far as none, however the names were hard af for me to memorize.
I read the story's first three chapters and I admit that it is good with such an excellent detail of the background, expression, tone and everything. Five stars⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
The story starts off quickly. Here I was thinking about what will happen and suddenly I am at the hospital. The characters are strong and well-written. What interests me more is how many words will they hop. The chapters so far are fun to read. And I liked the small explanation you gave below the chapter 2. Helped a lot to understand. And the cover is beautiful. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to reading more chapters.!! <3 <3
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Nice story! It sounds interresting as well. And there’s the translation for The people who doenst know some words which helps a lot to understand the story. The writing quality is good too. Not to many errors. Keep it up!👏
Awesome work !! Loved the progression of the story. Descriptions are perfect and characters are well set. loved it. Eagerly waiting for next chapters. keep up the work 😇😇
Woah !! Noble but ruthless palace .Good background building. .I like it .Haha the system is funny. Keep up with the good work author .This book has good potential .Update more chapters , looking forward to it .
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Delightful work. this novel is appreciative. keep it up, author! Work hard to achieve your goal. 👍👍👍 the plotting is very admirable. 🌱🌱
Such a fun read, fIlled with laugh out loud moments. Love the dialogue between the protagonist and system 555 🤣 Looking forward to more updates!
It was fun to read. I personally likes how the author describes the environment. The writing was excellent and the vocabulary was good and perfect in the situations. Though I was confused in some parts, the plot was well articulated and does keep the readers on hook.
Clicked on the novel because the cover was beautiful and the tittle was intriguing. Stayed bcs of the writing quality 💪💪 Keep it up writer-nim! 🥰 Excited to see what's going to happen next
I really like your novel style, everything about the novel from plot to every person is well built , and eventhough it have slow pacing, but the satrting is very good, really looking forward to the novel
I gotta say, this is written gracefully. You can feel the hard work here. His vocabulary is great as well, really compliments the writing style. The story is good of course. The updates are pretty stable too, the standard. I love how he vividly displays the world around the characters. Good going fellow author!
Writing quality amazing 😍 updating stability seems to be going well The story is intriguing in w unique way But the writing skills are amazing. Story development Also unique
Writing Quality: Awesome Stability of Updates: Pretty stable Story Development: Great Character Design: Strong and well-built characters World Background: Very interesting
This is story is definitely an explosion of surprises. I am not a fan of system stories but this makes me want to read more of it. How could you not drive to read when the synopsis it self is kicks you to dive in? Great job author!
It's a dramatic opening with a well-outlined plotline story. It has a unique concept to retrieve lost souls. I can see future it has multiple world setting. A good read so far.
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