89 Author's note - END of ARC 2 - Mr. and Mrs. Jelly

Author's note:

Wow, I had such a hard time writing these two chapters. Sorry, this author's skills are still insufficient, I wasn't able to put the scenes in my head on paper. It was so difficult to describe Xuan Mu's and Bing Shi's feelings.

Maybe at the end of the book, I'll edit it all over. Are any freelancer editors available? No? Ok.

Some interesting info:

1. Word count of ARC 1 is about 20k while ARC 2 is about 80k.

2. The word count of these two last chapters is about 40% of the ARC 1!? Crazy right?

3. ARC 1 is a bait. Just a trial arc to get into my writing skills. And a bait to lure in readers.

4. If you read carefully some piece of information would connect together. For example a few hints in the first and last chapters of ARC 1. (EDIT: Something wrong with Xuan Mu because of white hair, Bing Shi choosing black clothes when she goes out and for the Halloween party.)

5. I started to write this book because I had nothing left to read.

6. I never thought I could write. Like what? And boom Second arc finished... a 100k word novel appeared with so many positive comments. *Throws candies and chocolate at my readers.* Thanks a lot! You keep me going!

7. Xuan Mu is not only a ML (male lead). He is more than that. He is my second MC (main character).-> Go give him a hug, he'll accept it. But forget about hugging Bing Shi. Just to be sure. There is only Xuan Mu for Bing Shi. There is not even a second male lead, Bing Shi has no feelings to spare.

8. Xuan Mu pampers and protects Bing Shi, but the true pillar of their relationship is Bing Shi.

9. After reading this arc, Bing Shi makes much more sense in ARC 1, don't you think? I recommend reading the chapter "1.0 - Beginning" again. She was extremely happy at first, then she started to lose optimism in the middle, becoming more and more impatient at the end of the ARC.

My questions for my dear readers who are currently riding on the journey together with me:

1. Were you surprised by the ending? (I wanted something different, something with meaning. Sorry no truck, killer, sliding on a banana kind of ending. ML mourning after the MC, because she died in a terrorist attack inside a bank/plane. You name it.)

2. If Bing Shi and Xuan Mu had a wedding. Should they go big or small?

3. Do you love the chemistry between our Jelly couple?

4. Found any plot holes? Any improvement tips? I'm good at taking critiques, come at me! *Putting on an armor*

9. Did ninja onions knock on your door? Or the opposite...ninjas with bird feathers?

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