jikanyotomare
hiii, author here... i would like to shamelessly give myself 5 stars. cough... well, like wise men say, you should proud of whatever you do... i would like to thanks everyone who give the effort to read this story and if you don't mind, could you please leave me a review or comments, i would love to read it. i would quotes what minions said. "I'm not addicted to reading, i can quit as soon as i finish one more chapter" cheer readers^^
I give it full marks... Here the author is learning n improving and trying to provide a good story. I suggest if you don't read the novel completely and just depend on mistakes in synopsis then don't review!! "U R Not Eligible to Review" or Comment in such a way that encourages Author!! This is my first Novel Review in webnovel and am happy to review this Novel. As the author is well aware of his/her mistakes and working on it, I wish author Good Luck..👍🙂 Dear author, the story is good and interesting, keep up the good work. 🙂
Wow. I'm pretty surprised there are actually upvoted reviews that I actually agree with talking (in general) about the issues of books written by amateurs and people unfamiliar to English. The writing quality and character development are all over the place, which I've noticed in multiple Original novels and has seriously quite a few of my brain cells. In fact, I've been quite dissatisfied with the whole "write your own novel" thing on this website because a ton of books (like every single one) really didn't meet proper quality and came out just to kill the brains of people who read it. I used to like this website due to the fact that it only featured translated novels (which are in fact, are edited), but with that new update, the quality of this website has dropped down by a whole lot.
So far the best wuxia novel i have read after chaos in beauty.straight to the point,no beating around the bush story line as some novel tend to drag story without resolution as to where its going making some readers lise interest.I'll give this a thumbs up thought just a suggestion some of the statement needs to improve its grammar and tenses..Above all I really enjoyed reading this..thank u author
This might be a bit long 🤓 The FL is not someone you meet in other webnovels. She has realistic character and cute straightforward demeanor you'll see in today's society, and this is considered a unique mixture between ancient chinese background (i suppose) and millenials story. I can't help laughing about Senja's action and also Tianyao's (i hope i wrote in right) reaction. Furthermore: • You'll find the novel is easy to read despite of minor grammar error (it does'nt bother me at all though) • The scenes are flowing, the way author describes everything really turns me on to read more and more and more. I can easily imagine what kind of scene is happening in every chapter which is kind of rare to find in this webnovel universe. • Although some details is not quite fit, the way author let the story goes is worthy to be appraised, he/she's able to draw our intention to the book. It's a nice talent i think • I haven't finished reading this book, since I'm such a low-budget student, so everything I can do is just log in everyday, and (force my self to) satisfy my daily supply of Senja and Tianyao little by little. But i can assure you, the SS price is totally reasonable. Approximately around 3-6SS per chapter, and you won't be dissapointed in each purchases. • Finally to conclude this review; YOU WILL LOVE IT! It's been a while since I lost my interest in reading webnovel's ebook after Ning Xi's and duo buns ended, but this novel DEFINITELY draws my attention and amazement. Can't wait to finish it! That's all from me, giving you a hug from Indonesia, thor ❤ Hope I can read your other masterpieces ❤❤❤
Hiii... i would like to review my friend work here. She show me a couple of chapters of this story and i love it! It story tells about transmigration and psychology, not like many other transmigration story that the MC couldn't back to their era, here she could back to her own era after she finished her mission. I like transmigration story with black belly MC and unpredictable plot story. If you have the same like as me, you should give a try to this novel. My friend would love it read what you guys thought about her novel. Cheers,
By far the best thing i have read on this app. Story plot ws so captivating tht its so easy to overlook th grammar mistakes. All characters had life.. They were not just background characters and the way the author managed to tie it all up together is simply amazing. Thank u for gracing my eyes w this beautiful story