TokyoAnime_Seven
Heyo Readers, Seven here [Shameless Review] Well it's my second novel on wn, and if you have read my first one, then you must know how much Innocent of a writer I am πππππ€£ So my new scapegoat's name is Xin, and he is pretty much of a smart, intelligent and overpowered character. But here is the catch, this great novel is being written by me. So I can't let him have a peaceful life, can I?! π₯Ίπ Join Xin and, enjoy his 2x Isekai adventure in the other world?! Well that's enough for now I think. Seven Out~~ Nyaa~~ *Cough feels cringey*
That was a fun read~ π I could tell that the Author had really improved a lot when comparing this to his first book. Both the grammar and the flow is a lot better. I did notice a few mistakes like lack and misuse of punctuation, repeated words, and typographical errors. But since they are minimal, they are easily missed and did not hinder my immersion. β¨ The concept is quite daring. Set in a world with magic and modern technology, the main character is on a journey to the top while exacting his revenge. I think this book has great potential if developed carefully. And I believe that the author is doing a great job so far. π Keep it up, Author Seven! π₯ And more power to you~! πππ
Another Good Novel from our jesting Author. It's not another isekai novel you can find anywhere. It's a cliche starting novel written in a very new way with the author's funny imagination. Good writing, straight to development without almost no grammar mistakes. Although I know a lot of readers bored with the isekai novels, give it a try. I am sure You will not be disappointed. What does that Itsuki say? ~~nya
Forgive me for my bluntness in this review. I really do not have a personal grudge against the author; he is actually one of my good friends. And honestly, besides the writing quality portion, the review isn't much of a roast. Writing Quality: Has definitely improved since the author's last novel, but it is nowhere near perfect. The reason is because of inappropriate word choice and sentence structure (he is almost always in the passive) that makes both enjoyable and easy reading near impossible. For example, to describe tears and emotion, the author used (not an exact quote): "He was so sad that tears fell down his face and the white membrane became red." Red and white membrane?? This strange wording distracts the reader from focusing on the emotions. Apart from this, the author's style is more comedic, and the writing seems to be more detached everywhere else. The author also uses different variations of English, sometimes British English and sometimes American. Stability of Updates: automatic 5 because the author has a positive record. Story Development: To some, it might be a bit too fast, and to others, it'll be too slow. To me, it's too fast-paced. By chapter 6, we are already in the first scenario, and the main character got used to the system and this world he is in way too quickly. Even though he now has the memories of his past life in this new world, he should still be at least dazzled. Character Design: I could feel that the characters were all very well thought out, from the way the main character had to experience all of the experiences his soul had in order to feel motivated to take revenge and/or live. World Background: Again, I could feel that everything was well thought out, from the intricacies of the system (a genre that I find to be actually extremely difficult to handle) to the different characters and their stories that were introduced. Work hard, Ansu chan (seven)!
Another story from the shameless author but this shameless author's novels are always truly appreciable. l have read the given chapters nd so far it's a amazing story with as funny ML. Sad people should definitely give this a try(cough...not like other can't). So set ur seat belt nd get ready to read this nyaa~~ novel nd torturous life of ML becoz this author luv to torture his ML nya out~~ (well kick this nya outπ)
This book sure will be interesting like the others, its good composure and character design is nice and awesome. system so I say its a thumbs up for the author of this book. All the best :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck: :star_struck:
I liked it very much. It was fun and enjoyable reading this. Unlike other novels this novel is more about fun with a solid plot. When you are bored after a hard day, this is what you should read to relax yourself. As a bonus you can directly contact the author and curse him few times to vent out your frustration. He won't mind. [img=recommend]
Alpha here! This story is interesting and gripping from the first few paragraphs. I am a huge fan of the isekai genre, and reading this plays an anime in my head! Seven did an amazing job of illustrating the scenes with his word play. Also everyoneβs favorite plot device Truck Kun makes an appearance! Definitely give this Novel a try if you like isekai storys! Now shower Seven with powerstones and collections! Have them rain from the skys above!
Well you can say I am pretty obsessed with system and over powered novels, and here I found it all. Cool mc, smart too as mentioned by the author, overpowered and very intelligent. Just try it once, and you will see his charm and magic. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ