Devil_Paragon
the book had potential but it was limit by the author inexperience. this book is mostly direct for the aged of 16 and 19(horny boys). I only got thru 20 chapter before dropping it. The way ***, rape cultivation, even the world background is depicted signals the author lack of imagination! As the author writes more and read other works, this may change in the future. maybe my review is harsh and bias because of the books I have read before this. I won't deny that if I was a typical 16-19 year old this book probably entertain me.
All in all, after finishing the entirety of this book, I am giving it a 5 star rating. Why? Going past its ups and downs this story provides an interesting, captivating plotline throughout its entirety. It has lovable characters(if you ignore MC's twisted morality) and memorable moments that make me go: "Wow!". Finally, we cannot forget the juicy 18+ moments sprinkled throughout the novel. I feel so very fortunate to have been a part of this journey for the past years and I hope to see more work like this.
IT DID BE BEST IF YOU MAKE KONRAD TO CUCKHOLD HIS OWN FATHER FOR BEST AND IF CAN THEN GET EVERY SINGLE BEAUTY OF HELL AND HEAVEN , DON'T YOU THINK ALSO GET THE MOON AND BLOOD NETHER,WELL IF YOU CAN THEN MAKE KONRAD TO REGRET'S PAST LOVER AND MOTHER TO GET NEW LIFE FOR MAKING HIM CUCKHOLD AGAIN WELL YOU MENTION THE LAST PART IN PAST CHAPTER😈😈😈😈
I enjoyed reading the story, and I can see that you have everything planned out. The execution is also great, I was reluctant to read it, as these kinds of stories all just jump from one girl to another with little development, but you're able to balance them well. Don't give up and all the best. P.S I would recommend you to change the book cover to attract more readers, the present one is of poor quality, and does not show the book's spirit.
Of the hundreds of novels I've read, both completely and partially, This stands above all others. Of all the novels I've read, there are only 2 that I wholly like. It's not to say I don't find any faults, rather they are inconsequential with regard to the overbearing success of the novel. Issues that would otherwise provoke vociferous responses in other novels, don't in this novel. This author stands amongst one other author in consistency and coherence. Because almost every other author is incompetent, they don't maintain a rationale throughout or are privy to other frivolities. Where you see confounding thoughts as it pertains to apathy or emotion, or really anything in general. One minute a man might slaughter mercilessly, the next he is helping out useless peons. There is generally a good amount of meaningless text within every novel. Where word count succeeds succinctness. Which often results in a lack of critical thought and attention, whereby consequently important text is cheapened. Almost every novel I read now is simply cheap work, there is an evident lack in thought, whether a reflection of competence or not is besides the point. Though I still maintain, cheap work should be mercilessly attacked, otherwise it will only spread like malignant cancer. Chinese trash exists in part due to this. Above all that, the content of the story itself is riveting and exciting, I'm not a fan of some of the debauchery, but overall without a doubt the best novel I have ever come across, and sadly it will probably remain that way. Stupidity now flourishes in excess on this platform, there exists no originality, it's cheap mass produced goods, enjoyed by the dull minded mass, where everything goes.
This is probably the first review i've written in my years of reading on webnovel. It took me nearly 9 days to read from chapter 1 till 575. It was a great story, no complains about anything. The ending was satisfying, the cuckolding throughout the story was amusing. The story gave me many boners from which some were put to good use. I'm really glad that i decided to read this story and if you are planning to write more stories in this genre, please let me know, i'd be delighted. I truly recommend this novel to any who likes face slapping, hot scenes and a lot of funny moments.