Andru_9788
Iβve only read 7 chapters, but I am blown away. Although I donβt usually delve into this genre, I just have to add this gem to my library due to the beautiful wordings and dialogue. Definitely going to be a hit in the future ! Grammar wise, I actually never found any glaring mistakes. Either that or I managed to not see a single one along the way, which is quite surprising since I can spot mistakes easily. Just goes to show how immersed I was. All in all, I found this absolutely enchanting ! Keep up the good work, Author !
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I liked movies like "Back to the future", "Minority Raport", "Butterfly effect", "Equilibrum", "Inception", etc... I like the idea of time travel. Actually it is difficult subject and not easy to create something new. Your concept is inetersting! Dialogues are engaging, characters are expressive, descriptions also fine. All the best with your story!
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