Reviews of Primordial Dimensions
Primordial Dimensions
HideousGrain
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A satisfactory combination of system and normal cultivation setting A plus point for adding more races than the tipycal elf,dwarf,... +:mc isn't some stupid guy unaware of everything +:He isn't cold-blooded which is rare in recent novels +: Hunting beasts scenes appears real because we don't see mc hunting them with just a single slash of his sword -: the only thing that worries me a bit is that I don't see any description on what is beyond advanced dimension
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The author has a penchant for writing YA heroes in a dystopian world and this book based on the initial few chaps seems to be as brilliant as his debut novel. Some people may not like info-dumps but I like to get a good look at the world and the background where the story is set in to get a feel of the book. The initial chapters help set the story in action. Shaneβs transition from a conflicted youngster to the main character with a mission makes it a worthwhile read. I generally do not read system novels but I would gladly make an exception for this one.
The story is good it's just that it's going downhill boring. There's so many technical explanation than the story progression. If you disect the chapter 86% of that is explanation then the remaining is the story development. Sometimes I think this is a technical book instead of a novel.I got so bored from reading this that I wrote this review of a pent up frustration to relieved me from ruining my day.
Heavily overrated for how bad the grammar is, sure superb world building and character development, but if you have to read thrice the same phrase to understand what the author wants to say I can't give it a higher raiting. What's so hard to get an editor? You can find a half decent one for little to no money. I am sure the money made on the novel can cover for an editor. Well my opinion.
Just started reading but my first impression of it was why add the whole transmigration plot? Couldnt he just have the blessing? And in doing so the whole story and behavior would make much more sense, I am not a fan of having an adult transmigrated mc behave like teenager. And the whole progression of the story is kind of slow and dull, its arduous to read, I kind of get trying to make it more realistic with the whole normal cultivation but that's kinda duft since this is fantasy and cultivation in itself is fantasy so why try to make it realistic, give me so fast boosts man, give me some thrill.
[Author note: With this chapter, the first volume of Shane's adventure comes to an end. Thank you for accompanying me in Shane's adventures and I hope you all enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. As I am building a multiverse, it is very important for the timelines to be aligned, which means that I have to divide Shane's journey into two parts! I don't want to spoiler you guys too much, after all! I hope this won't come across as an absolute shocker to all of you. My writing journey has just begun and I have a new novel in store for you. It will be released in order to create a suitable timeline and trust me, it is even better ;) This new novel will be released on the 1st January 2022, while the sequel detailing Shane's escapades will follow once the time is ripe! Happy reading!!] I understand what the Author is trying to do here and I hope it works out for him and his LNs. However, for me this means that I have to wait over a year or two to finally get to read anything more about this LN while he writes other ones. Right now as a reader all I care about is this one and moving forward with the story. By the time he gets back to this LN I will have stopped even caring about it or the MC.
The concept is intriguing but that is where it ends. After that, wether it is story progression, being coherent or the Main character, everything is disappointing. Considering the militarised nature of the world, the lack of respect MC shows towards its military is very surprising. The only apt character trait that author has been able to bring forth is how a typical wealthy son would act. He has his narrow point of view which is based on the elite pov as is usually is.
