Reveal spoiler
Checked out a few initial chapters and I would say it is written quite well. Give it a try you won't regret it. More power to the author! [img=recommend]
Dora you did it once again!! Ahh! I'm SO proud of you! On a serious note tho' this book is amazing, has an hooking plot. It's basically everything that I'd procrastinate with. In a good way that is. [img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins]
not bad not bad keep it up /(>w<)/ /(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)/ /(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)/ /(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)//(>w<)/
Truly a well written and thought out story. I enjoy the mc and elder jings character journey, along with the pacing and learning a bit of each characters through dialogue. Overall 5 stars and alot of effort was placed into the plot and I appreciate the hard work! Keep up the good work and I hope to see more of this story!
Writing quality and word building is good but cultivation base balance is off the chart, how come measly qi condensation cultivator attack can be threat to a nascent soul cultivator
I like the story a lot so far but the 1 problem I have is MC personality. Idk why but I really dislike people who bootlick or act respectfully just because of status. Like being shameless is fine but bootlicking and declaring to pursue a woman you met less than 1 month ago is kinda dumb.
Nice novel ... Just want a good harem .. Rest is best... 👍👍👍💓💓👍👍👍👍👍👍💓💓👍👍👍💓💓👍👍👍👍👍💓💓👍👍👍👍👍💓💓💓👍👍👍👍👍💓💓👍👍👍👍👍
The unimaginable words to describe certain scenrios of the named novel what an amazing creation. I just want to sato the creator of this novel to keep up with the fabulous work . I hope more chapters to come.
OP novel by OP Author, The author did a good job with this novel and I am interested to see how far and where this will go. Keep up the good work
Such a majestic story I cant describe with words. The author did a great job. Highly recommended. Keep up the good work author. [img=update]
They say don't judge a book by its cover. YOU SHOULD DO IT FOR THIS ONE! The book is as amazing as the cover. I read until I ran out of book. A+ highly recommend.
Your story is very interesting. I can tell you've put a lot of thought into your main character, and the world that he lives in. It's shaping up to be a good underdog story.
Loved the story's background and setting as well as the characters I read. The author has a vivid imagination and has created a world for us to enjoy! Great Job! As expected of my rival
The story looks great so far, I would recommend everyone to read it, you won't be disappointed. keep working hard author.... fucking 140 word count.
I don’t know what to say? I am speechless and shocked to find this gem in this chaotic world 💎 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell the future readers not to miss this one.
such a cool story that I can't even form right words to describe it! I shall bow to you, heavenly dao! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .