Reviews of Primogenitor in Marvel

MC is too naive and good. Overwhelmingly wholesome and slice of life, If I have to say. With a typical excuse of, "He is the most powerful person, he will pass his life leisurely. What can he do beside that?" Too peaceful and the MC just likes to take liability on himself.

not worth to read when the chapter can't even name it. just put a number

Мне всё понравилось) И советую автору не переживать по поводу плохих коментариев, ведь это твоя история, твой мир, твоё детище, ты должен любить его и лелеять не смотря ни на что

Honestly, it’s a master peice. I was a bit hesitant in the middle sections with the big plan, but it turned out better than I could have imagined. Btw I suggest you keep reading for this one cuz it just gets better, in writing quality, story, etc.

this is the first time i read strike the blood fanfic crossover so it iis good

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This fanfic is very good, I liked it a lot This fanfic is very good, I liked it a lot This fanfic is very good, I liked it a lot This fanfic is very good, I liked it a lot

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Engaging story, well-expressed characters. All written in a wonderful way. Great job, keep up the great work. Undoubtedly one of the best works I've read lately.

I expect a lot from you keep it up It has a lot of potential, I hope you don't make it super op because although it's good at first, it later becomes very predictable

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it's quite new for me as people don't make strike the blood fanfics I only wish I knew were the powers came from

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next. next. next. next. next. next. next. next. next. next. next. next. next. next. next. next. next. next. cp

Honestly, i LOVE the concept the only complaint would be the issues that pop-up from this being a translation such as weird wording or pronouns being a little wonky.

Good story interesting MC with different kinds of powers being the progenitor of vampires along with being a king of a nation and raising a daughter quite an interesting and intriguing book look forward to reading more and can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book