Primogenitor in Marvel

Honestly, i LOVE the concept the only complaint would be the issues that pop-up from this being a translation such as weird wording or pronouns being a little wonky.

Good story interesting MC with different kinds of powers being the progenitor of vampires along with being a king of a nation and raising a daughter quite an interesting and intriguing book look forward to reading more and can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book

it's good it just needs a slice of life tag cause this is slow as heck with tons of cutsie foo foo.

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Great fanfic. Just one request, please name the chapters with actual titles instead of chapter number.

It's pretty good!

Keep it up man 🙏..............................

Great story. Kind of chill (slice of life vibe) but enjoyable. Would like more fight scenes with the mc but that’s kind of hard to do. Maybe when he fights multiversal threats?

honestly this is hands down the best marvel fanfic I have read and properly will ever read It is overall good the harem part is reasonable story base good no character forgotten they did ma boy loki good and a nice father figure overall the author you did an amazing job and I love your work I always give you and only you my stones

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great story, hope the MC give Kang a beating

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Una historia en verdad interesante, si debo ser honesto no encontré nada forzado en la trama ni huecos en la historia, por eso le doy a esta historia la máxima valoración, además de mis más sinceros agradecimientos al autor.

in the begginning it was good but later on he became your good little doggy aka Hero so no for those like good doggy Hero that's your stuff

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Well the only thing I have to say is that if you can past the starting chapters then you will binge it in one go like me. It is not that starting chapters are bad or something, I think it is because author was a newbie then we'll everyone is a newbie in starting. I had my fun reading all the chapters without any problems.

CH 218 Really likes it till now keep the good work up😊