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the story is good but mc is a little bit cringe.

MC is too naive and good. Overwhelmingly wholesome and slice of life, If I have to say. With a typical excuse of, "He is the most powerful person, he will pass his life leisurely. What can he do beside that?" Too peaceful and the MC just likes to take liability on himself.

not worth to read when the chapter can't even name it. just put a number

My favourite fanfic on here been gone for a bit so miss some chapters so going to have a re read

História é muito boa escrito ignora essas pessoas que falam mal da sua história ela realmente boa uma das poucas histórias de um vampiro que fica boa 🤔🤔😄😄😄

Мне всё понравилось) И советую автору не переживать по поводу плохих коментариев, ведь это твоя история, твой мир, твоё детище, ты должен любить его и лелеять не смотря ни на что

this is the first time i read strike the blood fanfic crossover so it iis good

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This fanfic is very good, I liked it a lot This fanfic is very good, I liked it a lot This fanfic is very good, I liked it a lot This fanfic is very good, I liked it a lot

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Engaging story, well-expressed characters. All written in a wonderful way. Great job, keep up the great work. Undoubtedly one of the best works I've read lately.

I expect a lot from you keep it up It has a lot of potential, I hope you don't make it super op because although it's good at first, it later becomes very predictable

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it's quite new for me as people don't make strike the blood fanfics I only wish I knew were the powers came from

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