Prime Originator

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I cannot say the early chapters are my best work, but it is my first book so do give it a try if you are willing to give this book a chance and allow me to entertain you.

Hmmm .. i like the very idea of the story.. i hate the way the lead character has too many women though😅.... The flow of the story keeps me interested...and I'm very excited for what was outside the wall.... What kind of monster they are ?^_^.. Anways please update soon ❤ I will continue supporting the story👍😸

Quite an exciting book, very well written infact excellently written. Made me cry at some parts. Very touching. The characters are well developed and conveying the emotions of the writer perfectly.

this novel is actually one of the best ones I have read so far. MC has a great character build while his harem is also 👌🏽. A great plot story and its not repetitive.

Oh man how should I put this, everything from writing quality to the power scaling and stuff like character chart and pacing of the story is excellent. my only problem is with the protagonist himself, he's supposed to be a Divine level cultivator who has comprehended laws but I don't see no signs of maturity or wisdom in his nature. He loses control quickly, is submissive, has 0 control over his actions when he's under the influence of his emotions and lastly he has this aura around him from his previous life which screams pampered and raised in a greenhouse.

its just awesome hope author won't drop it and continues the novel because I just love it ☺️☺️☺️☺️$-$+-$+$_+_+_--+$+-$-_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_++_+

The setting it's pretty unique, shame that's fleshed out in such a mediocre way. A lot of the times I have to make a conscious effort to remember thst people use weapons, are going through the industrial revolution, are in a kingdom and that they're fighting beasts. Again, I like this setting, but the author doesn't do a good job at showing it to us, the readers. The plot is... Mediocre at best. You always know what's going to happen and there's mistery and some plot points that are interesting, the problem is that the execution is heavily influenced by wuxia clichés so mistery turns into confusion The characters are okay. I guess. Some of them are likeable, must of them are pretty one dimensional. The MC has this pretty interesting conflict going on with his two souls, or something like that, what a shame that it wasn't higher in the list of priorities for the author. Oh and I stopped reading by 120. If you decide to continue on, I hope it gets better. Ps How in the world did his parents and sister dissapear and the MC didn't give a single f?

Good story with good character development. Plus the power level is different between MC and others. Still, author should make mass release or increase the rate of release to 14chap/week then all readers would be happy.

Currently searching for my next novel to read and stumble upon this. After close to 20chapters I think I'm searching for something else. The start is really confusing (fortunately gets cleared up quite fast) as well as the technological timeline of the world. But the main issue why I'm not gonna continue reading this is because it's just one mainstream cliche stacked upon another. - Powerful Reincarnator - Friendly fatty - Heaven defying cultivation method - orphan - actually the lost/missing son of the king - saves the beauty who's about to get raped, which then falls in love - gets offered to marry the granddaughter of some old dude he gave a pill. And that's just out of the 1st dozen or so chapters.

This is a good read the Mc is unique the story is well written the writer is great at making you feel like you are watching a movie not reading a novel if you like a story that takes story seriously and not just fighting give this a read

I really enjoyed reading this novel. I hope you can come back to it once wsa is over. I haven’t read your new novel so I can’t say which one is better. I just hope that you don’t completely drop this one. If you do, mark it as complete so I can read the last chapters without wasting my money on privilege

very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

Nice story. Hope you keep update!

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Really enjoying it, but Leon needs to do the Pah Pah Pah **** and plant some heirs in his women, though that needs to wait for after the wedding, which I hope won't take too long. Hopefully, Lina comes back before too long so he can get a wood seed.

Can't believe I made it through the first 50......sigh ,Mc is kind of a trash how can a past divinity have no fighting experience,Idk if the author is trying to be funny but it just make the Mc seem like an idiot

Read till ch 400+. This story indeed has lots of cliches. The lost prince, reincarnation, troubles from outside etc. If you have read other Chinese manhwa, you know those cliches. Also, harem, I dislike harems. Specially the new girl darlene he got in new tribe. I don't like that mc decided to take her also in his harem. the only saving grace of novel are: Arrogant young masters are only in beginning, cliches are solved fastly instead of dragging that plot. And stronger cultivation levels appear in moderation. mc doesn't go running around to stronger areas and offending people, fighting them, this doesn't happen in this novel. you can read this novel if you have read all other good ones.

JUST COMMENTING to convey to Author san please take your time but don't drop the story , i think the world building and all the mystries are treat while reading and your work will pay off .kEep up the good work.

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