Chapter 15: Into the ripple dimension part 2

after speaking for a bit wayne had already brought max to the group of people.

in the group there were 5 other people, 3 males and 2 females.

one of the men had bright red hair that was dazzling in the sun and had an imposing and handsome look.

he stood with everyone surrounding him, to his side was a blond haired woman with a beautiful appearance, wide sexy hips and perky tits. she looked very attractive but max could see the arrogance dripping from her.

next to the blonde haired woman was a shy looking girl, she had her head lowered down looking at the ground but max could still see that she was beautiful too. she had brown hair, and a slender but sexy figure.

she didn't have a exaggerated figure with huge curves but everything just looked perfect on her. her boobs were not too big or too small, just right.

her ass was not big but look small and tight. very alluring and firm.

on the other side of the red haired man was the two other men. max couldn't see anything special about them,

it was weird it felt as if he didn't focus on them and if he blinked his eyes for a moment in the next moment he would forget them. max did not know what was happening, they both had white pale hair and ordinary features.

walking up to the group wayne introduced him to them

" i found one " he said, max did not know why but he did not like the way he said that.

as he spoke the group all paid attention to him, max could see shock at his appearance in their eyes.

max knew it too somehow after being trapped in that place and experiencing pain and loneliness his body and whole being was changed, as if the pain was from him being remodeled and crafted again, he looked more beautiful, delicate yet muscline at the same time.

it was very strange to use the word beautiful on a man for him it seem too fitting. with his long pitch black hair that flowed like a river, and his deep red eyes that were as bright and red as a jewel.

on his brows he had a hint of an evil charm, it all came together to make him look very beautiful and captivating.

the woman with brown hair looked a little bit obsessed but then quickly it changed into a look of pity as if she was sorry for something before she quickly looked down.

" his name is max from a unknown small family so it should be fine to join us " wayne said again.

the red haired man step forwards and patted wayne on the shoulders.

" good job syfilous, my name is henry, henry starfiend and i am a recruit class rank 7.

it is great to have you join us" he smiled at max and reached out for a hand shake, max shook his hand.

the others also introduced themselves although the blonde haired woman who max learned was called sophie looked at himself with contempt after knowing he was from a small unknown family, it seemed as if he was no longer worth her attention.

the brown haired Woman is called lily and the 2 white haired men are called grey and white.

max thought to himself what weird names, grey and white ? wtf

after getting introduced to everyone max knew that he was the weakest, grey and white were both class recruit rank 5 and sophie was a recruit rank 6, whilst lily was a recruit rank 4 and wayne was a recruit rank 3.

after everyone learned that max was only noob class rank 6, they were surprised, he was only a noob and was coming to venture into the unexplored door alone.

they all just looked at him weirdly as if he had a death wish. even grey and white the two expressionless guys had a small change and looked at him as if to ask, just how stupid is he ?

" hahahah bravery or stupidity i truly wonder " Henry just laughed it off

" still i must admire it for both require one to not fear death" he said whilst patting max on the shoulder.

sophie just appeared to despise him even more and did not even want to breathe the same air as him. he saw her move back, max was dumbfounded was it that exaggerated ?

after the introductions Henry lead the way closer to the gate, the closer to the gate the more insignificant max felt but he just had to put up with it.

after walking for 5 minutes they all came to 7 tents all different sizes.

it looked like they were prepared as they only had 6 people before max joined, max didn't mind even though he had a bag with a tent and some more things in it on his back, a already prepared tent was fine too.

they all came to the tents and before the tents were some chairs. Henry sat down first in the chair at the middle of all the chairs and others sat around him.

after everyone sat down he spoke.

" okay, now that we know each other and are going to be a team, it is important that we all trust each other, this is not a game. there is no room for doubt, any hesitation to trust a team mate or follow my orders inside that door could mean the death of all of us. the death of both you and me"

he paused for a second and then continued " this is a very dangerous place, once we enter that gate and go through the new door then we need to stick together or death will come for us and take us all quickly and we don't want to die right?" Henry looked around

" we want riches, we want greatness and we shall fight for it !"

" we shall fight against the heavens themselves and bet against our luck, this is our chance, a new gate has not appeared in 4 years..... now that it has finally appeared we need, no we must take what we deserve".

" we all deserve greatness, we all deserve respect and through that gate beyond that door it awaits us ".

max a little bit excited by his speech

" now as your leader, i shall lead by example.... for trust to be i shall first show everyone what i can do, some of you might already know me and what i can do and some of you might not. regardless" he spoke as he stood up and walked to a clearing

" this is what i can do this is my ability the star fiend!!" as he finished he spread out his arms out wards and closed his eyes, inhaling in and lifting his head to the sky.

sparks started to crackle around him, then suddenly this sparks bust outwards then imploded back in forming red crystal like stars.

these stars quickly started to revolve around him as if he was the sun.

and he started to lift up into the air and float.

max looked at him as he floated in the air with red crystal like stars revolving around him, max did not know what the stars could do but he felt a tinge of danger with them just being there.

Henry opened his eyes one of them was red on where it was white before, it looked strange red with black in the middle. the other eye was normal, he spoke to grey " grey use it "

grey just nodded expressionless as ever. with a dim grey light coming from him his shadow got darker then started to change before howling weirdly.

it started to turned grey before it seem to stretch it's hands to grey then grab a knife from his waist, then it struck at the space where it and grey joined at his feet as if to cut itself free of him.

after this it got up and turned corporeal as if a grey creature and no longer a shadow.

grey just sat on his chair and paid it no attention, lily looked a little bit scared by it though.

" good bring it " Henry laughed

the grey creature cast it's own shadow then roared at it the shadow was blown into being and formed another small grey creature.

max could feel that this creature was weaker. the small creature grabbed at its own shadow and pulled at it. a shadow like goo was pulled out, the shadow like goo soon started to change and form shapes.

it finally formed a grey sword. after all this was done the small creature roared and rushed at henry with the sword in its hands.

Henry just laughed and waved his hand.

the red crystals instantly shot out at the small creature, the creature was agile and dodged to the side but the crystal glowed bright red then the creature was pulled back toward the crystal.

the creature was sucked back towards the crystal and as soon as it touched it, max could see red mist come out of the crystal and like a snake it moved and entangled the creatures arm.

the creature let out a loud screech as if badly hurt.

the creature quickly cut down with the sword in it's hand and cut off it's arm to free it self from the crystal.

grey liquid spilt out from it and as soon as it was free it jumped away from the crystal, but before escaping far the crystal quickly flashed red then exploded.

the creature was engulfed in a red flame.

after the explosion the creature was half dead. henry looked at sophie and said " sophie, go ahead show them what you can do"

sophie showed a dazzling smile and said " i will show this sorry thing how lucky he is to be on the same team as me " she said whilst looking at max with contempt.

she she reached to the back of her right shoulder with both hands as if grabbing something and with a unlocking sound she pulled out a futuristic gun. it was a deep blue and had gold lines running through it.

zzzzzz with a charging sound it lighted up before sophie pulled the trigger and with a small recoil a blue energy beam was shot out,

max could feel the danger from that beam he felt if it hit him he would be heavyly injured.

the beam hit the small creature and pulverized it into nothingness the beam seem to lose some energy but still carried on, past the creature heading towards Henry.

Henry looked at the blue beam heading towards him and uttered " star field ".

as soon as he spoke the red crystal like stars quickly moved and rearranged them selves into a grid before henry.

red mist came out of them and shot at other stars forming a net.

as the blue beam passed between the first line of stars a red wave passed through it and it was reduced in size.

the blue beam passed through the second line of stars and was reduced in size again this happened 2 more times before it was reduced to nothing.

" is there any need to use that move ? you could have just unlocked your sword or something" Henry asked sophie.

sophie just humphed and turned her head away.

Henry just looked at this and shook his head helpless, before the stars around him shot back into him turning into red mist before disappearing as he slowly floated down.

" that was my ability star field, i will tell you more about it before sophie and grey explain their abilities to everyone" he said after reaching the ground and walked to his seat.

" after that every one else can show what they can do, i am very curious about yours max, we saw you pop up out of nowhere, what exactly can you do ?"

( 2000 words again, next chapter they should go into the gate, i hope the story is not too slow, there is so much to explain. oh yea here is the classes just incase you forgot. noob, recruit, veteran, noble , king , emperor, God class and each class has 7 ranks.

i added the veteran class as i felt that there were too few classes and it affected story progression. there will be no fast leveling here, every single increase in rank is hard and so a slight increase gains respect when high enough and can mean a difference in strength. like veteran rank 5 and 6 has a difference in power and it is very hard to beat a higher rank unless ability is good and strong.

i still have to explain how the gate works properly and the concepts that i promised to explain last chapter but, this chapter had too much happening i will try to do it next chapter.

please leave comments of abilities you can think of, im struggling coming up with cool ones even basic ones, too many characters who need different abilities. help!!!!! ) and power stones !!!!! give me!! thank you lol. i really need power stones, im getting low reading and attention lately cause of low interactions. kinda depressing )