Reviews of Pokemon: The Beginning

I liked how it started, the story began a short time ago but I will support it. I hope the MC isn't an idiot like I see in other stories....... Soooo take this

I lIke it and deeply hope you wont drop it

Good concept! Very Excited to see where this story goes. I have been searching for something like this for a long time. keep up the great work!

i support!!! please update more! so far so good! this review has been made as of chapter 8 because that's the latest chapter right now.. Update! more!

i really like it good luck 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Better than average, worth your time i guess, the only issue i have is the updates, it's sucks. The recent chapter now is 25, and it has been 8 days since it updated. Here the Mc is transmigrated in a teenage during a class a few days before receive his first pokemon egg, the thing is that i wanted it to be like that since he was born, but here he wakes up like a few days before receive his first pokemon, which is not a bad thing, but in my opnion i think it would be better if he transmigrated in a newborn. The story development is average, i don't feel much of the Mc evolving and learning more about himself as the story goes on, but this is compesated by the action part which is pretty decent. The dialog was obviously made by a amateur, but it's not that bad, i mean, i've seen worse. The world background is good, we feel when the eviorement changes and how it affects the characters, and the author often talk about other organizations around the world that the Mc is gonna try do avoid or use. the world build for me is more abotu the factions and powerhouses in the world than the biomes and enviorement itself, and the world background here use this as the story progresses. We still gonna have to see how the story is going to be later, now is pretty decent but who know? Most of the novels i saw started pretty well too, but later got bad because the author got lazy, hopes this doesn't happen here.

a great start to world building and relly good writing as well. I'm excited to ride this train to the end. It's worth the read best pokemon fanfic iv read so far

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Love Pokemon ,and it's my first time finding a novel about them so thank you for this amazing Read 📚 Keep up the good work 💙. ......

This is one of the very few novels I enjoy reading on the web. The story is fresh, I love the critical thinking of the protagonist, the worldbuilding is amazing and detailed.... and in particular, enjoy your writing style! You have potential, keep it up :)

OK I finished it until ch.7 it's was not bad but not that good either the story was kinda rushed and the way he flex his knowledge on Professor was not a good move now it's kinda messed up right now so I stop reading its have a good potential though BTW it's just my opinion if you plan to reading this u should try it like I say it's have a good potential but the way story goes was out of my taste l

Up to 6 chapters in and I find myself excited for how this story will pan out. Up to 6 chapters in and I find myself excited for how this story will pan out.

Wonderful story! I love the entire idea, the concept of the rifts, new world and developments in them which are common in the canon pokemon world! I know there are few similar stories but none as well written and engaging! And those other fics do something I despise, they create their own pokemon... I just never liked that u know..back to the review, story rocks!its awesome! Please dont give it up.

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Masterpiece of a fanfic

it was great, just that I expected an adventure story instead of whatever this researching thing is. it's not a bad idea but my love of pokemon came from the adventures and encounters they had, which I deeply appreciate in the last couple chapters.

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I really enjoyed the story in general it was a great concept I was getting super interested then it just ended I really hope the author will continue to write and my stones shall be devoted to this book.