So far, pretty good. I can see a lot of potential, but I hope that you can take your time and not fast paced to much. So we can see some character growth and not just a wish filling fanfic.
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Great beginning of the story, can’t wait to see more on what are funny MC and his retard buizel are going to be doing what type of Pokémon he going to get for his team
The obligatory 5 star review from this author himself, pretty shameless tradition but we take what we get. I am going to be trying to write an engaging and fun story so I'd appreciate constructive criticism rather than plain hate but beggars can't be choosers so fire away!!
auther kun where are you we neeeed soooome the chapter i have for so long i am even wiling to give you my last shiny stone pls i need that chapter
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the story is perfect if you are looking for some battle and wish fulfilmint book this is indeed for you