Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

author i have a question for you, how are you able to put so much details into your story?. For me when i start thinking about the detail after some time head start hurting and i become frustrated and i have to start all over again. Did you talk months to comeup with somuch detail , not only for the system but the story itself?

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So far so good, I'm fully loving this story and the Pokémon that the MC has, especially that OP buterfree, man I keep saying that Monthra can't get more busted but she keeps pulling something out that shushes me

The story was pretty good for a while but now I just feel like it's being dragged...10 chapters for a single gym battle is wild...

Definitely one of the best Pokémon fanfic I have read. It’s slow but it’s well written and has lots of world building. From chapters 1-300 it was really good, although I liked the timeskip, I didn’t like how there were random side characters being added every few chapters with barely any context. From about 300-600, it got incredibly monotonous. It was essential meet with friends and family, train, research, and repeat. I could probably summarize the entire plot of 300 chapters in one chapter with how long they are. While the current chapters of 600+ are starting to get more interesting and the plot is starting to pick up. If I had to say a con, it would probably be how rather than a story it’s more of a diary. In the sense that theres little emotion in the writing, with the writing narrating the MC actions and not showing much personal development. For example, during the time skip he meets a bunch of people and becomes friends with them, but theres barely anything about why he became friends with them other then their initial meeting, then all of sudden they all come to his birthday parties and various other events. I don’t know if it’s just me, but everything just seems way too distant. Like if they were to all die in a Pokémon tide I would honestly not even remember their names 10 chapters later; however I would probably be more upset if one of his thousand of magicarp died. But other than that, everything else is good 👍

I like that there is a lot of details because it prevents plot holes from appearing and helps to understand why something is happening, it also helps to understand the power levels. The world background is one of the best I have ever seen in a novel. Its very good from the beginning but it gets better as it goes on.... at least for me it is very enjoyable. It's a slow-paced story and I like it that way! The only complaint I have is about the almost nonexistent romance. 5 STARS!!! One of the best fanfics and the best pokemon fanfic because in other pokemon fanfics it is hard to understand the power levels and honestly makes it ridiculous... this is my opinion and you don't have to agree.

well am at +50% of the whole novel and with that i can affirme that it's one the best if not THE best fan-fic of pokemon i have ever read it has an awesome and original storyline and the quality of writing is just perfect even the author makes me laugh with his interactions with the readers in the comments I have close to 2000h of reading in webnovel so i now it when i see a ''chef-d'œuvre'' Mr.author please continue like this 🙏😁

Okay, as you already know it's slow-paced, but this story makes it work or I am the weird one, whatever, the world-building is amazing, well I think pokemons of all gens are used up to a considerable extent in this fic which is rare to see in normal poke fics, a lot of things are hinted by the author, and considering that he said that he is gonna write more than 1000 chapters, I can see those things happening, however, you should have patience otherwise you will be left blue-balled, lol... Let's talk about writing quality then, it is up to the standard and chapter updates are 3-4 per week and those are 2k-3k each, so yeah I don't need to say more as those words are enough. Hmm, To conclude I can say that this is my favourite Poke fic without hesitation and one of my fav fanfics of all time. PS- Oh, I forgot to mention but the Author also likes the number 69 a bit too much .... or not? why don't you find out?

This is one of the best fanfic I have ever read before I have never been a loyal reader but know I'm completely changed. The updating speed is something I really cannot complain about every one has a life. And the background is completely different from what I have previously read and so is the character design and I love it.

One of the best Pokémon novel I have ever read

Congratulations, the author knows how to write. but the work has positive and negative points. positives: .family relationship, (which raises flags of possible tragedies later in history). .system for seeing the potential of Pokémon. .the battle clubs by types. .give a leading role to the parents (the tournament they participated in was cool) NEGATIVES Lots of useless information, (I'm talking about information like: I'm going to eat the chicken here and since I like to eat and blah blah blah... ; or I arrived at the department at 3 o'clock and to avoid getting scolded I woke up 15 minutes earlier, I preferred I didn't talk to my Pokémon and I went straight to the door, after making sure blah blah blah... that's nonsense! .lots of explanation. .he hasn't even started the journey and there are too many pokemon... if there were only 3 it would be very good. but the amount there is in chapter 611 and the journey hasn't even started yet... . and the Pokémon are extremely strong... what fun will it be if he isn't developing them on a daily basis with battles and defeats but rather in 'utopia'.... .I feel that it had and has enormous potential but the author has to decide whether to continue making chapters full of sausages. .human battle championships are boring (in my opinion) pokemon fan fic... I don't want to read about humans as the 'stars'... .raises a lot of flags about things that could happen, but only to hook the reader... 600 chapters and nothing happened (the attempted murders?? that's meant to deceive. I don't recommend it for those who don't have patience... I don't recommend it if someone realizes they're being fooled. I don't recommend it if you have better options. I recommend it if you have time, a lot of time, too much time... Author writes well, but is too slow.

This Fanfic is honestly a journey and does who want a quick Pokémon read then I highly doubt you would like this but at least give it 20 chapters. The story is long and there are barely any time skips, The Pokémon years are longer then regular years so a lot can happen in a single year, There will be no romance anywhere near the start as the story progresses slowly and if romance and harem is what you're looking for then this is the wrong place as the harem/romance part will probably start around chapter 700 but hey... you could just take is as building up towards it. INFO DUMPS, there are a ton and in my opinion I think the info dumps get smaller later on. The author is attentive to comments most of the time so if you have an idea or something then make sure to comment as he will probably read it, If you comment something stupid around the first 100 chapters then it probably won't matter as the story is 600 chapters deep already and whatever you did comment may or may not happen in the future.

Dose this fanfic have any romance?, MC x Female I mean..

(Sorry for my english ) thats been like an year that im start reading this fanfic and i very very like because even it is a informational dump thats is a cool informational dump thats set a very cool worlds background

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overall the great fanfic do read if u a Pokemon fan

I am starting to read and I love it instantly. Do you have a discord server or any form of way where I can message you? I am also writing a Pokemon fanfic and I would love to discuss with you. You are a very successful creator on Pokemon fanfic. I just want to know your insights if you are comfortable about it.

I like long lasting story with system I no its stupid but I love your story I’v been giving giving all my power stone to You I’ sorry about your grandmother please don’ t stop this story I’m sorry I don’t have any money for your patron

last time i wrote a review was 6 months ago 6 months later and he still hasnt started his journey dont get me wrong i really do like this fic but its taking slow pace to a new level.

I've read every single chapter till now and I have to say this is the best pokemon ff I've read on this app and still waiting for Mikail's pokemon journey to start[img=recommend] For those who complain that the is too slow for them, I can see you can't appreciate a detailed story to its fullest...