Winnie_D_Pooh
Wow!!! The synopsis sent me right into the book without even thinking twice. What a nice way to peak the interests of your readers! The story so far is an amazing one. I just had to stop at a certain chapter to give my review and ratings. It's a 5-star from me for such a good job on your first book. Each chapter leaves you wanting more, an evidence that you did a great job👍👍👍👍
I love love this!!! The characters, the positive vibe is just freaking awesome. I love that it isn't overloaded with scheme after scheme (Don't get me wrong who doesn't like schemes that leads to juicy face slapping 🤭, I just find it refreshing that its happening too much here. The bond that the characters have with their respective families is awesome, cute and HILARIOUS 🤣🤣
goodness this is too dragging.. a very insignificant group conversation can last up to 2 chapters.. this novel is full of useless interactions and convo that it drags the story slow. i am now in chapter 50 and the only significant decelopment after the one night stand is bai renxiang finding out she's pregnant.. dont tell me another 50 chapters to go before she could give birth.. haha
currently in chapter 30.. if not beacuse the story has potential, i would have dropped it this early . i can tolerate the grammatical errors, but not the overly detailed and cheesy conversatios that are dragging the flow of the story. . its like you are listening verbatim to the actual conversations of people that even nuances are included . so annoying. .