Phone App: Portable Armory
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Nice book so far ......................................................................................................................................................
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The author has done a very good job in making the main character realateable. The mc was somewhat relateable for a high school boy that fell in love and suddenly has guns out of nowhere. The plot went very fast, but I like it due to the fact that I like guns and smartphone. If you're reading this, I hope you give this story a try. The mc is relateable and the most important thing was meme. This story has a lot of memes.
Great Idea, Nice Plot Arrangements and Good Characters. Just missing the world background, character's background and action immersion. Just want to feel each trigger of the gun and shot. Great work!
The story is quite interesting. It has a lot of potential 'cause of its nice concept. The writing quality is also good and the flow of the story keeps the readers interests. Good work author!
Good intro Well designed protagonist Waiting for more chapters. Continue the good work ππππππππππππππ ππππππππππππππ