Reviews of Phantom of a Devil (BL)

The plot has good potential since I felt the premise was really interesting and intriguing. I would especially like to see how the two main characters develop their relationship since even their childhood relationship would make readers go "a***" 😊. Coming to the writing part, the author can really improve it by fixing some grammar hiccups and tenses. Also the point of view can be modified in such a way that the readers flow won't be interrupted; I would suggest to write it in such a way that it would allow a smooth transition. And I would also suggest adding a bit more detail to the world building, so readers can just get a basic idea. Other than that, this novel is awesome and a great read 👌I hope the author keeps up her good work with consistent updates 😁

It’s actually my first time to read BL romance. 😅 I love how the author has a lot of descriptions of the characters. And it felt like I can also feel their sufferings while reading. Keep up the good work, author!

I will be honest, I don't read a lot of BL stories, more of shoujo fan, but I have watched a few BL anime like junjou romantica, love stage, yuri on ice or my personal favourite banana fish, with a friend of mine that is a proud Fujoshi, so I guess, I can give this a go. Well then for starters, this is a really good read! The only downside is the curently published 6 chapters. Now the review proper, the world and the setting are just perfect in my opinion, the dark setup that we are given and the world building are really well done. Now for the characters, quite the cool and funny cast we got here, I like them all so far! And as for the grammar, I think it's pretty good no mistakes whatsoever that I took notice off! All in all this is a great story that I will surely keep an eye on!

A top 4.8! Woo. I love the concept. Finished reading all 6 chapters, eagerly awaiting more. I'd love if there were more biblical references or mythological references though!! Justttt saying. I love how you've constructed the plot and moved it forward slowly! IT IS WORTH A READ. FOR. SURE. update soon!!

love the idea! Not gonna lie, I was pretty confused in the beginning but eventually got the hang of it. Found some grammatical errors here and there but run it through some editing software and that should fix it. Keep up the good work!

Love BL storys! Especially ones that have a great story line. You have a interesting story so far of what I read. Im excited to read more. Keep up the good work :)

This is actually great I've never once taken interstate in BL but I may think twice now lol, the grammars were excellent well atleast better than me but still there still some errors well you can just edit that, also I like the writing quality and the sentence structure is my cup of tea.

I can see that the storyline is carefully done, and the character design is very interesting. The story was very refreshing and I like it. I like the start and the growth of the plot flow. However, what I liked more was the world background, even from the summary, I knew the story would be very unique for me. Please keep up with the good author! Can't wait for more updates.😊

I just read a few chapters from this book and a couple of reviews that caught my eyes and I completely agree with all of them. This book's overall plot and writing style is attractive and the word choices are 👌👌 So far I also find no error whatsoever, the author cared about his/her writing and it shows.

Nickaido's here. I never read a BL before, your book was the first one. Overall it's good even if the start is little hard to comprehend, I like your plot. Great work so far, keep up, I'll be following you. I've sent you a stone as encouragement. More chapters.

Dear Author, I don't usually read BL... I like you idea. The storyline keeps well the readers attention, characters are expressive, dialogues are engaging, descriptions interesting... The technical side of the story (grammar, stylistics, punctuation, etc.) is well polished! Good work! Keep writing!

give it a chance!! it has a great starting! i kept reading until the end☺️couldn't stop. it could use some grammar and tense checks tho....really can't wait to see where it goes!!!

Through doing a quick read I can see that the author takes a lot of care in their work. The story is without error and the storyline is clear and concise. So far from what I read the story is interesting dipping into what seems like Japenese mythology with the Yokai spirit realm. Great work.

Hello, Author! BL is not my typical jam in the slightest, but I want to let you know that I enjoy your story creation and world building immensely. Please continue to pursue your passion of writing, and I wish you the best of luck in the future!

I have always gave a book a try whenever I find it to have a good title and this book is no difference yet again different because it proved to be the most interesting of all. If you really love to read great books, here is one of them just read. 👌🏾

♥ Quick Thoughts and Rating: 5 stars! This is a must-read book. Slow-burned romance, but still worth the read. Keep doing a great job author. [img=recommend]

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Ok so impressive approach to the concept from the start! The world background is developing well. Well constructed plot and intricately designed relationship between the characters. Good work, keep it up, Author!

Hello Author! I can't judge your work just by reading 2 chapters. Are those names Korean? It's my first time reading a novel with those names( it's a plus point!!) English too is not my first language thus we should work harder! Keep writing Author! Keep updating!

Overall the story is interesting and I wanna know more about what's gonna happen and what had happened. I'm just a picky reader, but I think there are some grammar errors and better way to type of some of the sentences. Nothing a little bit of editing won't help. Good job so far though!