Pet Simulator

best story so far d writer really tried with d novel my best story so far d updating stability is frequent same asd character design more ink to ur pen

Hones it’s addictivetly. Even though it’s still a transmigrate/system novel it has a unique feel since it isn’t focusing on making MC op alone but his pets too

I really enjoy this story! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

While the writing has a few grammatical errors, the story is easy to follow and has great world building. It's main character is also very funny.

Now overall I have to say that this is certainly in the upper half compared to all the books I've read, "usual" and online. So I do recommend it to you if you fancy these types of novels. I'll still at least say a few words concerning the categories. The writing quality isn't bad. It's just not perfect. I can't remember any mistakes or any nonsensical phrases. So the novel is at least written in proper English. However, it isn't particularly outstanding English. It's just the usual almost purely descriptive English most of the WN novels (that are proper English) consist of. You won't find any excellent adjectives or particularly fitting and non-repetitive verbs. And I hope you weren't expecting that. Otherwise you'll have a very hard time finding anything to read on WN. Still, I can't, in good conscious, award five stars. I'll save that for when I'm absolutely convinced by the writing quality. Then there is Story Development. The story is coherent which is already a feat compared to other novels. It seems to be well-planned and there is even a bit of suspense at times which is also rare on WN. However, I wouldn't call it thrilling. It's fun to read but you won't be extremely invested in the storyline. There is particularly one aspect of the system concerning the future (I don't want to say too much) that the author has handled surprisingly well. It doesn't disrupt the story but is skillfully embedded in the general plot. Character design is hard to assess at this point, having only read 40 chapters, as character development is a major part of it and often the point of failure of many authors. But I will say this: The characters do have an apparent personality and their choices are, in my opinion, consistent with their established personality. I must add though that at least with first two pets the author has cheated in a way by bestowing unto them two very extremes of personality which naturally eases keeping it consistent. The updating has been stabily kept at "no updates at all" which I have to rate five stars. Obviously that'll change, should the novel pass the trial phase. World background is unfortunately a little lacking. Some functions of the system such as determining the final evolution form are simply glossed over and I, at least, have no idea how he knows what his options even are. In general though the history of the world as clear as it should be considering the context. The principles of the pet training are also gradually revealed. So overall, world building has been done sufficiently well. That is, except for the currency. The currency the author introduced was either severely mistranslated or the author has committed a few fallacies. Probably a bit of both. So to sum it up, there are few deficiencies but nothing that readers can't get used to. So I would still wholeheartedly recommend reading this novel. Just give it a try.

interesting book. I like the development so far. can't wait until his pets evolve further. I'm also curious about his parents story... there are a few typos but nothing that ruins the book so far, in my opinion.

It's an ok novel, better than some of this kind of simulation type, but nothing special or groundbreaking. It's just that it's pet-flavoured.

This was a good book I would recomme this to my friends i loved the book and thought it was amazing and i think that a lot of other people will to!!

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It's the best of this batch. The world building in the simulation is exquisite, and it's overall a very entertaining novel. It's definitely not the best I've read before, but it's still something I'd like to see continued.

Refreshing. In the burgeoning world Of beasmasters and slightly scarier pokemon worlds, this is a breath of fresh air. I cannot tell you how much i want this to be picked. No story deserves it more.

The story gets more and more interesting down the line.The goldenfinger is quite powerful but he still needs materials in reality for the Evo of his pets so he isn't going to be self sufficient anytime soon,so the adventures keep the story interesting and not bland anytime soon. Definitely recommend it. Though their are mobs giving information about the matches and the like which can be a bit annoying but you can basically skip it 😎.And overall their aren't much unnecessary mob-info-dumps like the above mentioned ones.So the story is quite good for casual read.

A good novel, however the world background isn't really explained besides his city, and a neighboring one, also a lot of decisions I would've changed, like the fact he chose reality simulations over better things.

It was a good one 👍👍👍 . I recommend u to read it with all ur heart. Please be patient and read it. As at first it is a bit slow but it doesn't become interesting

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This seems interesting.