Dust Dark Green Shirt
These check in novels are everywhere. At least put some spin on it. What if relationship checkmarks / benchmarks = 1 check in? That would allow the author to focus more on story and can be a convient scapgoat when people ask why a certain thing happens. Or if you want to go really meta, have a reincarnation back in time, where they can only “sign in” when a plot point from their memories reoccurs, and it’s stronger the closer to their old memories that point is. The Protag has to balance using their powers while trying to mitigate the butterfly effect. I don’t know. Just looking for something new in the inevitable sign in genre that trial reads has become.
I have never seen an author suck his mc so much, each gesture, each movement, each breath, the author adds how majestic are mc, how shocking it is, how extraordinary it is, that everything becomes illegible, with each gesture in a fight, the author adds 2/3 paragraphs of sucking from mc, he launches an attack?boom 3 paragraph of sucking from mc, a dodge? boom 3 mc sucking paragraph. it's just unreadable.
Translation Quality As Usual Isn't Ideal But I Can't Complain Either Since There Has Been Worse. Stability Of Updates Is As Usual Since It's A Translated Novel. Story Developement Is Quite Good As Although Check-In Novels Are Nothing New It Still Has A Mysterious Twist. Character Design Has All The Cliches But In A Good Way Since There Has Been Very Little Of The Over Used Face Slapping World Background Is Weird Since They Are Isolated But As The Novel Goes On Some Very Interesting Ideas Are Used. Great Novel!!!
This novel is very very good... aside from the first 5 chapters. it states that the mc did some messed up things, like cucking his brother, but were never given any description of it and its only briefly mentioned in one sentence. If you can get through the first 5 chapters, this book is definitely worth the read.
first 40 chapters are pretty good, a bit too much going on with ranks of all sort but good translation and decent story. after ch 40 though, it becomes unreadable. feels like they hijacked a popular story and put it through chatgpt so thentranslators can show their bosses that they did something. from a solid 4/5 to a 1/5. this is a worrying recent trend
Have read through 25 chapters, the novel has a check in system novel but the MC is different, funny and isn’t a generic copy like all the other check in novels. The story seems kind of interesting too. Characters also don’t feel too one dimensional as compared to the other check in novels. Highly recommend everyone to read before giving a one star review.