Juliet_Omuadona
Relatable historical story. I felt so bad for the daughter. However, the synopsis is interesting and plot is well defined. If anyone is interested in historical story, then give it a look! It will not disappoint anyone. I loved it personally and that's why I am suggesting it. Keep it up author! Best of luck!
Iām so very impressed!! Itās honestly one the best stories I have ever read. I found this book accidentally and I was just planning to read a couple of chapters to give it a try but here I am 48 hours later just gobbling it all up! Pros -Very interesting characters the author takes you through various stories and past of characters and doesnāt focus on just one -Super interesting plot twists I never ever know whatās coming! -realistic character motivations and not everyone has a happy ending or is unrealistically perfect Con -many spelling mistakes, can get confusing at times (but the story is so good Iād encocourage you to give it a try anyway)
I picked this story up on a whim because of the cover picture which matches some African print decor I own. I have purchased all chapters up to 326, hoping something would improve but alas I am continuingly disappointed. The story captivated me at first with all the intricacies of family dramas being played out but the updating stability, character design, and writing quality is not satisfactory nor is it easy to follow when the author uses the wrong name of the characters in the scene being written. Grammatical errors have been so much in just one paragraph that you can lose the story completely. There's no proofreading happening and words that don't even belong in the sentence appear randomly making this novel very unpalatable. I'm frustrated with the fact that it's no. 21 in rankings and very few persons over level 4 reviews?? Author you have a great story here but your editing is absolutely horrible when using Google speak to text with no proofreading happening and grammar mistakes change the meaning of phrases and sentences. This novel is already past 300 chapters and these things have not been corrected?!?...you have made all this money so far and cannot fix this?!? I hope you can take my advice and critique to heart because I would really love to continue reading this novel to the end. Thank you for reading my review.
Officially this is one of my favorite stories now. I love the character development for evey each of them, I love Prince Sebastian and the story is amazing. The author knows how to interrwine every event and she keeps a good balance between grievances and good events. As well, I love how smart the FL is and how she is not a pushover. Iām eager to see more of Sebastian and Ellenās love story!!
OMG! This story is amazing! I love the charactera except the spoiled one. I am looking forward to the King and his son in law working together. This book is fulfilling my karma fantasy with my stepmother. My only complaint is the typos. I wish there was a way to correct them but otherwise I am pleased with this book
The relation between the king and queen was heartfelt, the story itself is flawless the story has many good aspects but few things will bother readers such as grammatical mistakes, punctuation errors may break the dialogues, few spelling mistakes too but if these things could be corrected the novel is gem itself