purple_mage
haven't read it but wanted to show my support for the concept. Would love to see more of these sort of stories on this site. each better than the next in some way or form. ill update this once I have a read a good chuck. Also, hope the author does not drop this and perhaps ride it till the finish line. Even I don't like it, there's just something about a complete story which hits different.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
Overall, a very good story. Sometimes there are grammar or spelling mistakes, but those are easy to look over. Pacing is just a touch too fast, and sometimes the story jumps around a bit making it a touch confusing but not too bad. I have very much enjoyed this story so far and I am looking forward to this as it further develops. Only character I don't really like, is the yandere, they have no place in a harem. At least in my opinion.
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Пожалуйста, придерживайся соотношения истории к двойному культивированию хотя бы 60/40. Не превращай эту интересную новеллу в обычный хентай. Так как был момент, когда главы с сексом шли непрерывно в количестве 2-3 десятков, а история в этот момент не двигалась. Двойное культивирование должно идти параллельно или небольшими отступлениями
I just don’t understand why his fiancé killed him,also how did he die? I mean he was kinda the strongest so is it really easy to actually injure him??? Why do all authors choose the most stupid way to explain MC death hhhhh.... what was the reason to kill him in the first place, just because he is a genius, really?? Lololol, why would his fiancé hate a genius like him. When he is every woman’s dream, doesn’t he have allies?How is it so easy to kill a legendary character like that? I mean unless everyone is stupid and has chicken brain. Only brainless monster go for the kill without consequences. Humans have emotions so there has to be a reasonable explanation for every MC death. People open your eyes lolololol