Reviews of Parallel Memory
Parallel Memory
SomDxD
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This horrible 30 chapters in and I just can't stand the mc he is stupid and foolish and his personality is everywhere is certain situations. to make up for word count
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It is your first writing so it can be understandable but why are you forcing scenarios? I know that your novel is inspired by another but blatantly copying the plotline of another? The immaturity of the MC is quite annoying you know. if you want him to be lovey dovey with Lisa then just make a plot that maybe it was a love at first sight instead of a dumb reason like going by the plotline in his memory. IT IS CRINGE. It needs more tweaks to be decent and plagiarism is not good alright
So far as of chapter 50 this is a great novel the only thing i think can ruin it is it being a harem, its fine if characters have crushes on him but if he choosese more than one imma be sad. Team Lisa >:). All that aside the thing that stood out was the main characters powers. I for one like the ice element and its not really used a lot so that makes me sad, seeing it used here is great. I enjoy the characters and enjoy how he uses his knowledge. I wish you lots of luck while writing this its a great story.
I made some corrections to your synopsis as I was checking some things out. Some minor grammatical errors, I think only five words were changed or so. A person's perspective plays a vital role in developing their personality. What happens when you realize the world you live in is the same as a novel. Zero Elea gets a skill called "Parallel Memory" which allows him to get the memories of his alternative self in a different universe. He realizes that the world he lives in is similar to the novel he used to read in an alternative world. The world will face catastrophe in the future but there is no need to worry as there's a main character working hard to save the world. And, what about me? I am but a mob character.
(current chapter 446) For those who think this is a copy of Author's Pov and what not yes it it in the early chapters where the power systems, characters, places are introduced. It's not common in these tropes and it will get a lot better. the characters are pretty flush out and have development from their initial introductions. The power systems is pretty simple and balanced out. Not sure when the side characters Mc tropes started but I say this is one of the above most others out there if you do like it then this is a highly recommended from me
I have been reading this novel and I have to say this pretty entertaining. you can give it a try. there are always negetive comments on novels so don't Just ignore them first try then decide because everyone has different opinions of different novel I have been ignoring this novel after reading some comments but when I read it I am not dispointed so pls read then decide.
The beginning of this novel was kinda rough. There were info dumps and dumb decisions. But, as time passes, you get addicted to the story. The writing style is easy to chew. The character development is also so well done! The way the author blends the personalities together after a few chapters is also so satisfying. I was a little hesitant at first as to whether I quit in the beginning, but, I'm so glad I stayed. I really recommend you give it a try and see if you like it.