Neobear
Deleted my old review because I messed up on some stuff.. my fault. đ Novel is really good. Author cares about the community and will answer questions about the book. The book itself is really easy to understand and has good world and character development. A example of the character development in this story is when âSlowâthe orc learns the three steps thing. đ This novel is probably one of the best for Nation Building or âKingdom Buildingâ. Out of space includes two books that are filled with action, and makes you want to come back for more. On top of all that the book is even free to read on both webnovel, and royal road. The characters in this book makes me feel like Iâm a jughead who crashed on a planet with only my brothers with me. I can feel the emotion between characters and how the author puts fine and sweat in it. I canât wait to see the fourth book and how everything is going to work out. Hopefully someday this book will reach the starts, not crash land on a planet only for weird wolf things to come and attack. đ
Been following this novel since it began. 1. English grammar is ok with 2 or more incorrect words. (No improvement so far) 2. Updates are constant as long as the author's healh has no complications. 3. Story Developement was going fine until the author has intentionally neglected and admitted to focusing only in conflict and using plot story from a movie. Latest conflict seems to be nothing more than a repeat of the Battle against the Hero. 4. Character Design and Growth was going fine, in more ways than two or three. However, the characters are now... bland. Sure there was minimal progress to the main characters but the side characters are either forgotten, re-introduced, or stagnant 5. The world background seemed no longer relevant to the author. The lives of the people, the location if places, the description of walled communities and the changes that the Main Characters brought onto the people, friendly or hostile. The daily lives of the people is a must in world building and the author has ignored the plebs in order to focus on combat. No more city developement chapter, no more Industrial improvements chapter. NO MORE IMPROVEMENT EVER. JUST FIGHTING.
Really like this novel. Great potential and development of the characters. Here we don´t have one main character but multiple characters that tell the story of the Unit Nations of Man fortuitous colony on a fantasy world. Very recommended to read for all that like Kingdom Building books with a really healthy dose of military campaigns and tec development.
The story is a little slow at first but soon after a few chapters picks up. The action is nice and detailed enough to picture it in your head. The POV changes alot giving us the view of even the enemy troops, it also doesn't pussy foot around and people do die. There are still a few spelling errors and grammar here and there. the story is really interesting and it has really nice comedy parts here and there. Overall the story is nice and I would recommend it to people