The story is well written. Brings in many elements unlike the usual materials included in stories. Hopeful for future updates. Read it all in a stretch at once... Nonstop. Was that interesting.
I really love stories like this one! GOSH!!!!! If you're reading this and you want some disciple-master relationship cultivation story, then you're in the right story! FIVE STARS FOR YOU!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER UPDATE!!!
Still very nice. Keep it up, dear author! I'd love to see more of his other discipless. Huhu, I'm so excited and delighted as well. CONTINUE THIS, AUTHOR!!! ❤️
love it! i just hope the story continues to be as it is, entertaining. there is potential. good luck to the author for this one and may you go for it and finish the story!!!!!!!!! <3
Gostei desse romance MC e foda muitos Mc's ficam muito presos ao conceitos de não matar gente inocente mas esse superou não sei se sou psicopata mas gostei
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ACKKKK!!!! IT'S FINALLY UPDATEDDD!!! FOLKSSS THIS IS THE MOMENT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR. I DON'T CARE IF YOU DON'T LIKE THIS NOVEL, BUT I DO. BLEHH
It's a great book, I have been searching master disciple novels, and this is a good one so please read it thanks a lot. ...................
WILL WAIT PATIENTLY HEHEHEHEHE.........................................................................ASDFGHJKL..................................
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This novel should get contracted already. I need everyone to read thisss. I need it to become premiummmm. heheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheh
Although i do like the weak to strong genre, its also amazing seeing an overpowered MC who just goes around being, well, powerful, keep it up author, the novel's wonderful![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The writing quality is at its best, and frankly the pacing isn't too slow, or too fast. It balances throughout the story, and I find that as an accomplishment.
OMG! I'm speechless. Though I'm not interested in cultivation books, this piqued my interest. I'm open to a million cultivation books that would be as good as this. The character building is 100% awesome, the world-building is exceptional, and the writer's voice is extraordinary. Everything is just beyond what I can compliment. Try this, readers💜 You sure gonna enjoy it, lest I forget, if you love humour, you can tag along. I'm so lucky to stumble upon this🖤
I love your story name it is unique. the book cover is also good. the plot is well managed. The arrangements of characters are superb. keep it up waiting for the next.
Ah yes, the first sentences themselves dictated that the author recognizes quality writing. The MC has a consistent design as the plot moves forward [Effortless, Humble and even Cautiously Smart]. I'm not that familiar with systems and cultivations but this book gave easy explanations for me to grasp the concepts of the two. I hope you'll do well and attain the success this novel deserves!
Cultivation + OP = peak fiction. This is my favourite type of novel so of course I'll be bias. Thank you author for making the writing so good so that I could enjoy the novel without having to pause every few paragraphs to understand what was written. If you're looking for a cultivation novel, well you've found what you're looking for. Get to reading!
The MC gives off the hot-blooded youngster vibe which is suitable for the system novels. World building is great and the writing quality is really good. Makes reader engrossed into it. The novel has the potential to become big. Go for it👍🏻
This book was an interesting read and I enjoyed it. Keep up with the great work author! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I would say solid story. The main character keeps his wits about him and is cool and collected. the story overall is good. I would say work on your Grammer and flow, I would often have to stop and think on a certain line of text as the syntax is very unique, it's not all bad it just breaks the immersion every now and then. I also make Grammar mistakes So I won't judge on that to much. The cussing is hilarious, again very unique. I Personally enjoyed the story so far.